Sea Spray

the cold wet sea spray fell upon my upturned face heard my own laughter

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Heidi Sands

Date: 2/15/2024 6:46:00 AM

This is great Sandy. Hold onto your special humor! :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 4/12/2024 6:14:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. We need to laugh whenever we can!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/14/2024 12:08:00 PM

Dear Sandra, this is a breath of fresh air. The beauty of the poem lies in its simplicity. You haven't described the scenery, the weather, or even your exact location. Instead, you've chosen three powerful details that capture the essence of the moment: the physical sensation of the spray, the joy expressed in your laughter, and the implied connection between the two. Great Poetry Writing! - Blessing, Daniel

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 4/12/2024 6:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Daniel for your generous comment! It is truly appreciated!

Lin Lane

Date: 2/14/2024 8:29:00 AM

finding joy in nature... fine Haiku, Sandra.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/14/2024 10:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Lin. I appreciate your kind comment.