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oh precious, dulcet diva, ocean-tide
you, of sand and foam and spindrift -
all your moods and meanderings
speak deep my spirit, wistful and wan
musings captured, gist enraptured …

       I listen, close ...

on those warm and windy days, your
voice cuts clear, carries with it the joy
of sun sprites alighting on wave tops
hopping crest-to-crest like so many
gold pieces tumbling from pockets, laden …

       I listen, rapt ...

becalmed days, the lull of low tide ...
gentle swells reach their arms ashore -
the cold brine washing sand and shell
like breezes sweeping the grasslands
rolling, as imagination rolls in the mind …

       I listen, soft ...

whispering in my ear of the secret
dark places in my heart, exquisite
shadowy realms where passion and
reverie hide, pulsing with urge, aphotic
warm, enigmatic feelings flow and ebb …

       I listen, true ...

an ocean storm's raging beauty, thus -
somber clouds, splashed Payne's Gray
swirl cruelly as Neptune flits his tresses
sea sirens lament with angry screams as
their backs are broken on reef and rock …

       I listen, soft ...

gentle swells lapping brief, the sand
moon rising to the lullaby of a bell buoy
its tender peals coaxing the moonlight to
shore, Luna's beams tiptoeing gently atop
to join the phosphorescent waterline
(not to wake the slumbering breezes) …

       I listen, sad ...

the gulls and terns laugh at the folly -
a man strains his ageing ears to the song
of the tides that he loves so completely -
the most divine and elegant aria known
and a voice so immortal and pure, that
it will croon on, long after there is naught ...

       left to listen.







~ 1st Place ~  in the "Your Choice (9), Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 3rd Place ~  in the "2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 7" Poetry Contest, Mark Toney, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~ in the "New Poems Only" Poetry Contest, Emile Pinet, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Voices" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/16/2019 8:57:00 AM
Wow, that is an incredibly beautiful poem. Worthy of many reads. Congratulations on your big win, Kai
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Date: 6/16/2019 4:53:00 AM
Magnificent Greg! Congratulations on your deserving First place win! Happy Father's Day! : )
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Date: 6/15/2019 6:11:00 PM
Congrats again, Gregory.
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Date: 6/15/2019 11:36:00 AM
wow, way to go, Greg. I see it was also win in Mark's marathon contest. I had no time to sit and choose a really great poem for Brian last night. I came down here and saw the contest was almost filled. I got an HM.
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Date: 1/5/2019 7:41:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Gregory.
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Date: 1/2/2019 5:26:00 PM
Greg, congrats on your win on mile 7 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! Magnificent! A Fav for me. ~Mark
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Date: 1/2/2019 5:20:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! AWESOME Janice
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:09:00 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Gregory :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/10/2018 12:44:00 AM
The same to you, Anne-Lise, and the most blessed of New Years ... and thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 12/8/2018 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Greg.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/10/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 12/8/2018 10:45:00 AM
I could feel your words and imagery created in this poem Gregory.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/10/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thank you very much for my placement, Silent One. Merry Christmas.
Date: 7/24/2018 11:01:00 AM
oh can't you just feel the all-around great poem wonderful read excellent poem my friend god bless Duncan
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/24/2018 11:26:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Duncan, I'm really pleased you enjoyed this one! :-)
Date: 5/6/2018 12:39:00 AM
Greg my buddy, your song of the sea swayed me. Yes I still here - sort of. Youve become a star on Soup. Over here were bracing ourselves for the communist onslaught and I have to do things now. You guys are always on my mind though. Love J
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 5:51:00 AM
Praying for you always, My Good Friend, and think of you daily - blessings and thanks, Friend - please stay in touch! :-)
Date: 4/28/2018 8:18:00 AM
Bowing to this masterpiece my friend! Awed by its beauty, depth and message... A fav....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/28/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert - that is so greatly appreciated, my friend! :-)
Date: 4/21/2018 5:42:00 PM
Hello Gregory, all i can say about your poem is Wow! Have a nice evening my friend.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2018 6:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Darlene - I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it! :-) <3
Date: 4/20/2018 11:30:00 PM
Brilliant!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/21/2018 12:08:00 AM
Many thanks, Sushma, my friend! :-)
Date: 4/18/2018 2:54:00 PM
AMAZING POEM! Well deserved win! Best wishes!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/21/2018 12:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Conner - much appreciated!
Date: 4/17/2018 12:03:00 AM
Wow Greg, congratulations on your well-deserved winning streak! Amazing how you come up with awe-inspiring and mesmerizing poems such as this one. Best regards :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:19:00 AM
That's so very sweet of you, Elaine - thank you so much, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 6:25:00 PM
Beautiful pensive lines! This is a haunting poem that poetically draws on the allure of moon and sea. A shot of adrenalin to boost the feeling of belonging to the past, present, and future of this great planet linked by myth and truth. Very well written my friend, Emile.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:18:00 AM
Thank you so very kindly, Emile - your opinion is one I take very seriously and rank highly - I'm so pleased you found this one worthy! Blessings, Friend! :-)
Date: 4/16/2018 4:08:00 PM
Alas, Dear Gregory,....a Monoku dropped into the poetic pond, stirring the muse to carry every ripple to shore....magnificent! Well deserved top spot...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:17:00 AM
And in floated your marvelous comment on the tide, of which I shall make a garland of friendship! Many thanks and blessings, my good friend! :-)
Date: 4/16/2018 1:52:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place with this amazing poem, Gregory - // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:15:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 1:52:00 PM
Dear Gregory, the form and rhythm is divine. Congrats on a most deserved gold medal win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:15:00 AM
And such a divine comment, Line - thank you SO much! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 12:40:00 PM
Yep....here at the top as I thought it would be! It is magnificent Greg! A very deserving first placement my friend. Congratulations! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:14:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Connie - I'm so pleased you liked this one! Blessings and thanks to you, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 11:25:00 AM
Excellent Greg, congratulations on your win!!!!! Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:13:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve - blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 11:15:00 AM
This is such an exquisite gem that is now prominently displayed in my box of faves! I’m not surprised that it earned first place in Emile’s contest! Congratulations, my friend on a well-deserved top win! Hugs. Pandita
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:13:00 AM
Oh, that is so sweet of you, Pandita - thank you so much for your kindness and wonderful comment! :-) <3
Date: 4/16/2018 11:10:00 AM
You've captured it all, Gregory...such beautiful imagery portrayed with your lovely brushstrokes of well-chosen words. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win. Sandra
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/17/2018 2:12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful comment, Sandra, and I am so thankful for your kindness and friendship! Blessings to you, Dear Friend! :-) <3
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