Sea Sculptures

Ocean creations,
By aquatic erosion:
Sculptures of the deep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 4:57 AM
They truly are beautiful Raul. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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September 14, 2009 at 4:56 AM
Another good one, Raul. I hope you enjoy your day as much as I enjoyed your poetry. Muy mucho!!! Sent with love to my poet friend. Lovingly, Dane
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September 14, 2009 at 2:10 AM
AWESOME! Raul. It actually took me under the water; in my mind of coarse. Love, Lainie
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September 14, 2009 at 12:06 AM
Reminds me Raul of Coral reefs that are so spectacular.Rgds Brian
Null Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 9:49 PM
Makes me want to go scuba diving....Karla
Gass Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 8:22 PM
Beautiful images in this, Raul. Like Karen the title caught my eye, too. Lovely display of your art! Love, Robin
Freeman Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 7:04 PM
Vivid, Raul, scene of fthe deep, Sincerely Moses
Mason Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Beautiful use of the form, Raul !! I think the nature programs on t.v. are my favorites and you have definitely captured the awesome wonder of the deep that most of us will never be able to actually visit ... smile ...
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September 13, 2009 at 12:28 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. The title caught my attention. Keep on writing! Karen
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Ever since i was a boy, i imagine the oceans empty. Great Haiku Raul>>James
Stella Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 5:40 AM
oh yes like james said I know those sculptures too there even down by pepin wisc you have great imagery in this one my friend thanks for sharing are you putting this one in for brians contest lol would be nice start
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September 13, 2009 at 4:40 AM
good work! Raul...reminds me of limestone sculpture I saw driving back from Wisconsin last weekend on the edge of the town "Castle Rock" yes...there is a castle-rock there...like narrow legos stacked to the sky...don't know how it doesn't crash-down!...I'm sure there are many such wonders below the surface of the ocean!...jim
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September 13, 2009 at 4:00 AM
the last verse is beautiful--Scuptures of the deep--Charma
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 3:43 AM
Nicely done brings up many images. Keep writing. Sara
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