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Joseph's 8 By 5 Contest  ~  February 16, 2025

Upon the calm sea there's serenity Peace resides in me Troubles laid to rest Comfort in my breast In a happy mood I show gratitude for this solitude A boat to charter o'er tranquil water I'm Neptune's daughter With wind in my sails I'm cured of what ails Quiescence prevails and contentment found Sailing on the sound

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Date: 2/25/2025 8:55:00 AM
Lin, your poetry depicts the kind of life we dream about. I suppose some ripples might present a challenge, but what we have now can certainly tempt one to take a cruise! Smiles!!
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Date: 2/17/2025 2:41:00 AM
That’s beautiful Lin, so soothing is the sound found in this - Sea of Serenity… Beryl
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/17/2025 7:29:00 AM
I'm pleased that you like this one. Thank you, Beryl.
Date: 2/16/2025 10:15:00 AM
I love nautical verse Lin, it's what we all hope for, calm waters and safe harbour in stormy weather. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/16/2025 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Lin, will do.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/16/2025 10:17:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I love that bold colored painting. I might try my hand at one like it. Have a fun time away.

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