Premiere Contest WinnerSea of Roses

I gaze upon a sea of roses, 
That paint the valley green, 
But I see the weed that poses
As grass in beauty serene. 

Red roses soar, ‘bove the hills
And not daisies nor the nettles,
Can distract from the frills
Of the sweet, sweet rose petals. 

But pale roses bound,
In bands so, so tight,
‘Till the poor stems sound, 
Cries of woe and cries of spite. 

The sun has come, yet still they weep,
Their petals stained with fleeting pain,
But through the earth, their roots run deep, 
And soon they rise to bloom again. 

And so the sun sings in the skies,
And bathes the land from black’ned lies.
Once more I gaze upon the sea, 
And not a single weed I see.
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Radice Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 4:16 AM
A very belated congratulations Adam on your win in the contest with this ballad that feels rooted (pardon the pun) in the classical style and all the better for it. Cheers - Gary
Ginger Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 10:15 AM
‘But through the earth, their roots run deep, And soon they rise to bloom again’ This is beautiful, congratulations!
Bondarenko Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 11:07 AM
Congrats on your win with such a beautiful work!
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 11:03 AM
Lovely and serene, except for the obnoxious weeds! Congrats on your win
Agustin Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 5:39 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you...
La France Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 3:37 AM
Adam, beautifully penned and congratulations on your top win in the contest ~
Pina Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 3:01 AM
Loved reading this, congrats on the win.
Agustin Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 11:58 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Empress Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 4:11 AM
Deep poem well woven for the prompt, love the flow of your words and how youv rhymed. Especially love Their petals stained with fleeting pain, But through the earth, their roots run deep, “ creative wordplay, thank you for joining! Congratulations on your win
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