Sea of Dunes

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The sun was newly risen above the Earth
his heated smile warmed amber desert sands.
The grand landscape resembled barren lands
as sepia grains were slathered by rippling waves
That's what I would see through blurred vision,
the hallucination of turquoise rivers in a mirage

The Sea of Dunes was tinted in maple honey tones
but bore no trace of boat, of oar, nor whale bones
It held no aqua fathoms of unmeasurable depth
and its ripples were not waves washing to the shore
Not one leviathan leapt at me from pages of lore

No lush oasis to be found in illusion before my eyes,
nor cool stream to quench my weary traveler's thirst
These Eastern dunes held no date palms for a feast
nor shade from which my life could be reimbursed
or gulls seeking herring, for I heard no hungry cries

Here, the moon did not control the ebb and flow
No tides except those guided by Mariah's breath
Her harsh winds blow without a wit of warning,
and scorpions do not fear drowning in an undertow
No sailor's widow need weep in weeds of mourning

In vast hummocks of golden glimmering sand
would I find myself living sorrowfully chagrinned
Lost and confused while the sun burned my skin
Circling the shores of this scorched desert sea
Parched, 'til death chooses to steal life from me

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Date: 4/29/2023 2:07:00 AM
Great descriptive poem, Lin, who can survive there? Love the pic though:)
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Date: 4/29/2023 1:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jo.
Date: 4/28/2023 1:44:00 PM
Your "Sea of Dunes" is a lovely write/story/picture. Hope you are OK. Have a great day/weekend.....................
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Date: 4/28/2023 5:21:00 PM
I'm fine, Paula. Thank you. Good weekend wishes to you, too.
Date: 4/28/2023 12:41:00 PM
Although it has a certain beauty it's a brutal and unforgiving landscape. Brilliant poetry Lin. Tom
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Date: 4/28/2023 12:53:00 PM
I'm not sure how this one came to me, but I'm glad you found beauty in it. I'd find it pretty too, as long as I wasn't thirsty, and my camel didn't run away. ;-)
Date: 4/28/2023 6:32:00 AM
I love deserts, at least the one's Ive seen. Very descriptive poem, Lin. I was beginning to get thirsty at the end:) Always a great read. Have a wonderful weekend:)
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Date: 4/28/2023 6:45:00 AM
You are not the bhishti, Gunga Din. I shall bring to you a sheepskin of water and thanks for your kind comments. ;-) Enjoy your weekend as well, Danny.
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