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Sea of Dreams Premiere Contest Winner

Out there at midnight by the lake, there are no clouds and the full moon is reflecting on the water. A shooting star comes by, inspiring a wish to escape reality. Stars shine in the water. I dive in to find another world. The bubbles fused with moonlight and starlight display millions of inner realms. Gems that were never written down or crafted by anyone else. I arise from the water, walking on a new pathway in the forest to begin the journey of a million lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/15/2018 10:29:00 PM
I know this one well, and I'm pleased to see it in the winner's circle once again ... extraordinary imagery. Blessings and congrats.
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Date: 2/11/2018 5:04:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, so packed full of imagery, i'd love to go float under there, nice, congratulations on ur first place
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:50:00 AM
Wonderfully warm and insightful Vermillion, congratulations...
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Date: 2/9/2018 9:02:00 AM
Lovely and uplifting, Vermillion. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 2/5/2018 12:36:00 AM
Congratulations, Vermillion on you win with a beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:42:00 PM
So beautiful, Vermillion. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 2/4/2018 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win Vermillion. Beautiful and deep poetry. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/4/2018 1:18:00 PM
Love how you wrap it all up. Congrats on your win, Vermillion.
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vermillion! Beautifully done. ...Fran
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Vermillion. Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 1/24/2018 10:38:00 AM
This piece is bigger than it's words, wonderfully deep. Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 1/24/2018 7:11:00 AM
beautiful, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/24/2018 5:54:00 AM
This was very unique in its imagery and perspective, and I loved the way it took me to places unexpected ... sublime imagery! Blessings and congrats on your SIXTH PLACE! Thank you so much for entering my contest! :-)
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Date: 1/2/2018 11:00:00 PM
I apologize if I don't upload every day. I am trying to put more effort and practice into making better poems than the ones I have now. I will upload about three poems every time I post. Thank you for your patience.
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