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Sea of Desires

Desires rest with drift of quicksand desires and longings melt down to the depth of seas.... Written Sept 26th, 2015 © Dr. Upma A. Sharma Entered into "Any poem- Not for a contest" poetry contest by Broken wings

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Vandana Sharma

Date: 10/14/2015 12:45:00 AM

So, much said in a few words...................................depth of sea indeed.

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2015 1:28:00 PM

That sinking feeling of despair! Fine short piece if I may say so, James..

Julia Ward

Date: 9/30/2015 1:18:00 AM

Your poem resembled a falling barometer as the emotions went down and down. A firm 7 for your poem. Julia, xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2015 5:56:00 PM

very nice!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/26/2015 9:53:00 AM

Love the association and imagery you have here Dr. Sharma. You say so much in a few words. When passion subsides it is sad and it is lost maybe never returning or resting for a while then returning. I felt a loss in this one. Made me sad. I guess because when you loose your passion for your partner it hurts the other person deeply. I felt this in this write. A 7 for me.