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Sea dreaming

I close my eyes
savouring the memory
of the clash of waves
and rhythmic sway
that rocked my childhood


AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:36 PM
what a softly engaging poem. Loved it...enjoy your evening, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Thank you very much, Sara ~ all the best to you
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 3:25 PM
ooh, lovely, yes!
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:04 PM
thanks for your lovely comment, Kim ~
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 2:15 PM
Very nice! I often do :-)
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:04 PM
good idea, Abdullah ~
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