Jeralynn Clark Poet Free verse

Sea Angels

Sea Angels

I walk the ocean sands
and wade among the waves.
I see an angel in motion
dancing on the foam.

This angel swirls and dips
the tutu fans with lunge; 
Ballerinas in mid air
Or wings of glossy jell.

Fragile form yet vile
Like love you've had awhile.
Beautiful, yet stings
Jellyfish at the beach.

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2010 at 8:11 AM Congratulations Jeralynn on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol

James Fraser July 18, 2010 at 8:09 AM Many congratulations Jeralyn on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire July 13, 2010 at 4:56 PM Awesome imagery and creative use of language, Jeralynn. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2010 at 3:30 PM Congrats Jeralynn on your winning poem in the Jellyfish contest with this awesome write .. never thought of them as sea angels but u gave new meaning to them with this poem.. enjoy your fantastic win.. with luv..

Tirzah Conway July 8, 2010 at 8:16 PM Yes they are quite beautiful when they are moving throught the water-Horrible stings though! Good Luck!~Tirzah~

Jesu Johnson July 8, 2010 at 7:58 PM I never thought about jellyfish this way... but you are right on.... Very good poem!!!!!

Anthony Nutter July 8, 2010 at 6:02 PM Excellent description of this spineless creature that stings so well. Nice read.