Sea Alice

There once was a girl called “Sea Alice” She lived on her boat, quite a “palace” Her beaus never end When their masts seem to bend The ladies feel nothing but malice!

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Harry Horsman

Date: 7/28/2021 9:31:00 PM

Wow, great limerick, unbending the ending i would say.

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/29/2021 4:45:00 AM

Thanks Harry!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/28/2021 5:32:00 PM

Ha, ha! 'Sea Alice' -- What a character, Mike! Good one! ~ Gershon

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/29/2021 4:44:00 AM

Thanks Gershon!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2021 11:19:00 AM

... :))) ... a good one, Mike :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/28/2021 2:17:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2021 3:42:00 PM

hahaha wonder if he can raise the white flag when the mast is erect lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/28/2021 3:35:00 AM

Have to ponder that one Jan!!! Thanks xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2021 1:39:00 PM

Lol Sea Alice was one busy girl. Good one Mike, you must join the next collaboration. Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/28/2021 3:34:00 AM

Thanks so much Tom!!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/27/2021 12:57:00 PM

Ah, funny...funny. I got a good laugh out of this one, Mike. I guess Sea Alice wears them out!

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/28/2021 3:34:00 AM

Thanks Milton, Happy Tuesday !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/27/2021 12:13:00 PM

Much humor you convey, Mike, in this fun read. Expertly delivered in just a few words.

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/28/2021 3:34:00 AM

Thanks you Vijay !!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/27/2021 11:35:00 AM

Hello Mike Gentile, thanks for the laughter. xxxx-oooo. Happy Tuesday.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2021 10:22:00 AM

Hello Mike Gentile, you are very welcome my friend. xxxx=ooooo.

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/28/2021 3:33:00 AM

Thanks so much Darlene xxoo