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Listening to the angry sea, and rain, while in my water room, i weave....

freaky weather in paradise.

I see beyond the sea-snake crown of thick-leaved jewels, as a gossamer veil conceals jealous goblins shape-shifting above a snow-dappled forest of freckled weeds… there third-eye rests amidst tangerine tentacles tearing my cinnamon green clemency glazed with holographic lime gold clover…. now I’m torn between wicked willows, and a weeping angel, vying for my peridot throne, embellished with envious emeralds, piercing passionately through sparkling scales of mermaid skin, as peacock oceanic fairies within skeleton silence flutter mint-teal memoirs of a narcissistic mantis~ tangling starry soliloquies.. there eagle-spotted mantas swirl across moon-kissed streams unfolding marine magnificence through mysteriously malevolent musings.. I care not for the rustic trinkets you wear on fiery feathers like cluttered calligraphy~ screaming in high-pitched stillness, longing to be seen and heard, their faded fragrance glows now within tranquil twilight roots like a forgotten facade, while I sit secluded~ in my flaming coral garden, as the modest maiden of the rosemary sun, unmoved and unbothered, by the wailing wind carrying notorious narratives of eclipsed echoes from sorrowful souls, where hollow fangs caress cruel currents of chaos, oblivious to the sonatas of jasmine rain, for I sing not for the spiteful tides of tethered turquoise, rippling with salt-soaked souvenirs mirroring the untamable agony of lost ancestors.

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Date: 5/27/2024 4:54:00 PM
Beautiful, it must be beautiful there....lovely images of 'paradise'- <3
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Date: 5/25/2024 2:13:00 AM
Fantastic alliteration and fervent imagery. The best one being the octopus which in Malta is a delicacy with tomato spaghetti (alas no longer allowed in my diet).
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:08:00 AM
Thank you dear victor, we do too love octopus, i love octopus. I appreciate your kindness and support always
Date: 5/24/2024 7:22:00 PM
Your imagination and alliteration are fantastic as always.loved how you mixed weeping angels with wicked willows. How do you think up all these imaginative phrases?
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:14:00 AM
Awwn thank you sweet andrea! I adore you
Date: 5/23/2024 8:06:00 PM
Beautiful seaside stories in which each stanza is a jewel.of wisdom. It feels of constant movement, varied thoughts, and ebb and flow of the tides.
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:25:00 AM
Awn thank you so much sweet hilda i appreciate your support always
Date: 5/23/2024 8:01:00 PM
Dear Ink, I am deeply moved by the way your poem immerses the reader in a surreal and whimsical universe through its vivid descriptions and dream-like storytelling. Your use of evocative language and emotional depth truly captures the reader's imagination, creating a sensory journey. Your skill in depicting a lush and vibrant world with phrases like "sea-snake crown of thick-leaved jewels" and "glazed with holographic lime gold clover" is truly outstanding, transporting the reader to a magical realm. Your gift for portraying beauty in its various forms is truly commendable.
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much dr sotto your kindness i always appreciate and am grateful for! You always read so thoroughly! And leave such soulful comments! Thank you again
Date: 5/23/2024 7:44:00 PM
I said I imagine your metaphors and it feels surreal. "untamable agony of lost ancestors." How about we let them loose and see how much damage they can cause? Lovely alliterations and weave of words. A weave mistress you are. "freaky weather in paradise" we are in sync about that. Cheers dear Ink.
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:27:00 AM
Haha you know it! This made me smile! Thank you sweet tonye I appreciate youu
Date: 5/23/2024 5:01:00 PM
to create such beauty with your words is magical and leaves the reader with a sense of awe
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:42:00 AM
Awwn thank you means alot coming from a talented poet like you! Grateful really
Date: 5/23/2024 1:37:00 PM
I was mesmerized by your poem's beautiful images and dreaminess, Ink. I loved its depth and mystery, reminiscent of the sea. This is a fave. :)
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Date: 5/25/2024 3:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for the fave and comment dear evelyn always grateful for your kindness
Date: 5/23/2024 10:18:00 AM
IE, I like how you can describe beauty everywhere and in all kinds of situations. Some people get very bothered by other than sunny weather, but you are unfazed and going about your sharing of all the wonder, which just proves that you are doing something enjoyable. Very cool!!
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Date: 5/23/2024 8:27:00 AM
It's raining in heaven??? In the summer??? No way! I wonder though what inspired this poem.. Your poem is a vivid interpretation of surreal and fantastical imagery, weaving a dreamlike narrative that captivates the reader with its evocative language and emotional resonance.. It is rich with vibrant, sensory details that create a fantastical world. Phrases like "sea-snake crown of thick-leaved jewels," "tangerine tentacles," and "glazed with holographic lime gold clover" paint a lush, otherworldly scene.. The use of colour and texture is particularly striking, immersing the reader in a vivid landscape that is both enchanting and unsettling.
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Date: 5/23/2024 8:31:00 AM
Its free verse form allows for a flowing, almost stream-of-consciousness delivery that mirrors the fluidity of the oceanic imagery. The lack of strict structure emphasizes the poem’s ethereal and spontaneous quality, enhancing the dreamlike experience for the reader. I feel it is a masterful exploration of nature, fantasy, and internal conflict, rendered in stunning, imaginative language
Date: 5/23/2024 8:09:00 AM
Dear Empress, I loved going on this mesmerizing journey through realms of nature and emotion, interspersed with intricate imagery and depth. Each line is a wonderful scene and stark reflection, evoking a sense of wonder and introspection, which makes it my type of poem. I always feel your mastery of language and vision is truly commendable. It's no wonder I've made it a favorite—it's a piece I'll return to for its beauty and wisdom. I love your unique light through your words. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/23/2024 6:36:00 AM
Oh sweet Empress, thhis is overwhelming to me. The imagery is SO. realand to me scary. Speech of a sea-snake, you succeeded…
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Date: 5/23/2024 7:33:00 AM
Awwn dear sally i saw a sea snake for the first time, pretty but scary, different to sea eels. So got inspired also. They slither in silence. Through seas. Hugs so good to see you
Date: 5/23/2024 4:48:00 AM
Beautifully you conveyed the sights and sounds of stormy weather roiling your paradise, my friend. I imagine it is scary when you are so close to water, but not for you: unmoved and unbothered, by the wailing wind carrying notorious narratives of eclipsed echoes---Excellent depiction, Ink.
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Date: 5/23/2024 4:33:00 AM
an amazing alliterative poem, dear Ink. I marvel at what you create. This poem was exceptional. We should all be unbothered by 'currents of chaos' and embrace the 'sonatas of jasmine rain.' Well done, Ink! Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/23/2024 3:01:00 AM
I see beyond the sea-snake crown of thick-leaved jewels, ooo child the blow of power..jealous goblins shape-shifting above a snow-dappled forest of freckled weeds…freaking junglies… peacock oceanic fairies within skeleton silence.. marine magnificence through mysteriously malevolent musings.. faded fragrance glows now within tranquil twilight roots.. ooo love an amazing alliteration!eclipsed echoes from sorrowful souls, where hollow fangs caress cruel currents of chaos,Mmm breathtaking imagery…
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Date: 5/23/2024 3:36:00 AM
Thank you papi appreciate you taking time to read
Date: 5/23/2024 1:48:00 AM
Rippling with salt soaked souvenirs. Wow
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Date: 5/23/2024 2:11:00 AM
Lol nothing wow abt this

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