Sea-Sickness

It must be sea-sickness.
Her stomach is stir up; 
it growls louder, and louder.
She coughs up high surges and spits on humanity.
Yes, the great one is sad; 
 bluer she gets, 
as the days go by. 

Civilization sucks …. 
oil from straws passing through the belly of the deep; 
crude is the conscience of this beast.
Darkness seeps on the ocean floor, 
suffocating the coral reefs.
Ears were numb to the billows roar
 until the black blob washed ashore.

Wise guys devise white lies
Of how much poison she is forced to drink. 
Refinement reeks loudly, 
so stink, 
as foul as a politician,
 and the great one whisper hushed the land: 
“Down with social progress.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/31/2010 6:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem and it is a great poem to have featured this week~~
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem chosen to be featured this week on PS! Thanks for the kind comment on my poem, Earle. I enjoyed "Sea Sickness" So relevant. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 8/30/2010 7:31:00 AM
Wonderful poem ... loved this one and its been cleverly put together nice work congrates on being featured this week love Jayne
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Date: 8/30/2010 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Earle. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:27:00 PM
Congrats Earle on your featured poem this week on the Soup. .. a nice one to share with us all.. appreciate your warm and welcome comments today as well..with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations to you Earle on your win in Team PoetrySoup's contest "Gulf Oil Spill". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win,,a wonderful piece written with imagination and flow,,,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:54:00 PM
Very nice write! Congratulations on your win in the Oil Spill contest! Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:56:00 PM
Congrats Earle on your first place win in the Gulf Oil Spill contest with this brilliant piece.. enjoy a sweet victory this happy Sunday..luv..
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:15:00 AM
Wow, I love this Earle.. So many truths in your piece as well - tc Wilma
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:21:00 AM
wow!!! deep in the motions of your poem. I can feel the power of thoughts being written here. , totaly agree with your ending words,,,pretty strong,..p.d.
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