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Sea-Ing Eye-To-Eye

in our bathtub, eye to eye floating on suds and such, mind to mind… wandering .. . . . . bubbling thoughts without foundation, merely bland lips and blush. danger lies on the other side of the tub. our hands hang on to the sides ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ through the years of frangipani and chamomile, the subtle touch of vanilla skin, that tantalizes every nerve. O O O O O O O the sea stirs mightily... voluptuously lingers as fingers cling to the see-through boat. ...a knock at the door brings us to our senses. the crocodile smile says it all so we must hide our wiles hilarious footdance erased shower curtain in place ……………………….………… //////////////////////////////////////////////// \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\O\\\\\\\\\\\\\ ////O////////////////////////////////////////// \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\O\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ 9/10/2019

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Date: 9/16/2019 7:29:00 AM
I see the bubbles and the waves and Trixie and I both delight and laugh!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2019 7:31:00 AM
Heeheehee...thanks!
Date: 9/11/2019 5:13:00 AM
Very creative verse, love the layout Kim, not long now. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2019 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 9/10/2019 5:45:00 PM
The Validation Code awards you an MBA! Great way to start your day! Aloha! Rico
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2019 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Rico!
Date: 9/10/2019 2:14:00 PM
Delightful poem and lovely presentation, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 9/10/2019 11:54:00 AM
Cute as a fluffy kitten, Kim. Love it! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon!

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