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Sea-Ing Eye-To-Eye

in our bathtub,
eye to eye
floating on
suds and such,
mind to mind…
wandering ..
.
  .
    .
      .
bubbling thoughts
   without foundation,
merely bland lips and blush.

danger lies
   on the other side of the tub.

our hands hang on
   to the sides
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through the years of frangipani 
and chamomile, the subtle touch
of vanilla skin,
that tantalizes every nerve.
O
   O      O
      O
                  O
            O
                   O

the sea stirs mightily...
   voluptuously lingers

as fingers cling
   to the see-through boat.

...a knock at the door
brings us to our senses.

the crocodile smile says it all
so we must hide our wiles
hilarious footdance erased
shower curtain in place

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9/10/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/16/2019 7:29:00 AM
I see the bubbles and the waves and Trixie and I both delight and laugh!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2019 7:31:00 AM
Heeheehee...thanks!
Date: 9/11/2019 5:13:00 AM
Very creative verse, love the layout Kim, not long now. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2019 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 9/10/2019 5:45:00 PM
The Validation Code awards you an MBA! Great way to start your day! Aloha! Rico
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2019 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Rico!
Date: 9/10/2019 2:14:00 PM
Delightful poem and lovely presentation, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 9/10/2019 11:54:00 AM
Cute as a fluffy kitten, Kim. Love it! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon!

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