Scribe Under Fire

Scribe Under Fire

The wall had been there for an eternity
	
	closing gaps of time and sacred places

		field stones memories and gentle caress


Hans could not write any longer any 

	shorter it was too loud and far too quiet

		the truth did not escape the lonely

			fortress of sheltered dreams’ betrayal


He had lost a touch of his mind and a hand

	already in previous senseless exchanges

		luckily he was born tough and left handed

			before right became wrong and left was a crime


When the trenches had become thicker 
		
	with blood bodies sticky bayonets guts

		gore debatable glory and forlorn medals

			Hans wrote from the depth of soul and despair


Hell bombs grenades shrapnel and agony

	enacted a torrid cacophony of fire and noise

		his nostrils became scorched while his ears

			refused to hear and to listen any much longer


Scribbling poetry on the back of cigarette packets

	his molten fountain pen fused with his mind

		and he fought for his life his sanity and one

			terminal act of kindness morale and advice


Hans could not release even one more shot from the

	gun dangling from overburdened shoulders but

		the sergeant shouted ‘attack you wretched coward

			 for King and for country for honour and sweet victory’


It had been a modern war and someone must have

	known about shell shock or post traumatic disorder

		but when they executed him with clean merciless shots

			from a nameless firing squad because it was not for refusal


But for spreading fake news about the beauty of war for

	sabotaging innocent minds of future generations for

		soldiering with a mighty pen and not with a glittering 

			sword so he was shot at the wall for writing and not fighting


September 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/6/2018 1:39:00 PM
Wow - what a strong message, Kai. Congrats on a beautiful and powerful poem.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/7/2018 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Line. The fires are raging all over the place and I can write poetry in the safety of my home. What a privilege. Where are the poets in politics?
Date: 10/5/2018 4:14:00 PM
OMG Kai, this is so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes! I am so glad she put this on her winner's list. It is so special! I am putting it into my Faves! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/7/2018 1:29:00 AM
Thank you Connie. The fire is there. Burning all around us. 'Where have all the flowers gone?'
Date: 10/5/2018 2:23:00 PM
Kai, congratulations on your well-penned WIN in my contest! This poem was amazing but especially this part: "Scribbling poetry on the back of cigarette packets his molten fountain pen fused with his mind and he fought for his life his sanity and one terminal act of kindness morale and advice" Keep writing my friend and keep entering contests!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/7/2018 1:35:00 AM
Thank you Caren for reading and liking my poem. And thank you so much for sponsoring this and other contests. Many kind wishes, Kai
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