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Scribbles On My Mind

I’ve got scribbles on my mind Thoughts trying hard to find Random echos in the wind Of more than poetic friends What is it with you and blue A penny for your thoughts And a kiss for just a clue Can sapphire come from two Raindrops like fingers touch A falling silky, sexy rush Sweet girl I feel your flush Oh my.. Is that too much See you clothed in evergreen So deep beyond what’s seen Beauty within.. taste so true Love breathes all over you What if I.. your morning mist Cotton candy clouds, I insist And that carousel of dreams Everything’s not as it seems That clown who said depart Not the end but a new start Your hand, oh look it’s free New man.. what if it’s me Poems don’t always rhyme Chaos makes sense sometimes They say, true love is never late So l long anticipate and wait ~Lyric Man Note: A collection of random scribbles.. just for fun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/1/2019 8:52:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem! It mimicked the feeling of a rush of thoughts all tangled together so well! I love your last stanza and your thoughts on love! Thanks for this poem! ~Heather
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Date: 11/28/2018 5:28:00 PM
Hello Lyric Man, True love is never late I also anticipate and wait. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/28/2018 9:41:00 AM
Lyric Man, if only I could 'scribble' as eloquently as you!! Great write and a pleasure to read. Merry Christmas to a great poet and musician.
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Date: 11/28/2018 3:54:00 AM
Just loved your poem.Have a great day!
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Date: 11/27/2018 12:30:00 PM
Wow! Most excellent poem Lyric man.
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Date: 11/16/2018 4:05:00 PM
Loved this poem...Lyric man..
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Date: 11/15/2018 6:20:00 AM
beautiful one!!!!
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Date: 11/14/2018 1:33:00 PM
What you call random scribbles is a pleasure to read, Dave, and would definitely touch many a lass's heart! Congrats on obtaining POTD award. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/13/2018 3:27:00 PM
Your romantic scribbles enchant my imagination with their charm and beauty, Lyric. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/13/2018 6:22:00 AM
Lovely first line. So beautiful, Lyric! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 11/13/2018 1:01:00 AM
Excellent scribbles Lyric Man. Masterpiece. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/12/2018 9:18:00 PM
Love your scribbles. Another masterpiece.
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Date: 11/12/2018 1:20:00 PM
Your scribbles got you POTD! Pretty impressive I would say Dave. Congratulations having this this wonderful poem honored,! : )
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Date: 11/12/2018 12:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., L.M. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2018 12:21:00 AM
Congrats, random or not you are the master of lyrics!!!
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Date: 11/11/2018 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations Lyric Man, on Poem of the Day. Your words whisper softly along the wind. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/11/2018 4:58:00 PM
My friend, even your "scribbles" are fine poetry. Congratulations on POTD...
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Date: 11/11/2018 2:55:00 PM
Awesome. congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/11/2018 10:27:00 AM
I can hear the guitar and the voice of a cowboy. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/11/2018 10:24:00 AM
Nice rhythmic vibe...words sail smoothly through the lyric...Congratulation LM ...All the best my friend
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Date: 11/11/2018 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your Poem Of the Day honour, is much deserved. I knew it was a winner when I dropped by to read. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/11/2018 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Lyric Man. Well deserved for this gem.~ Warren
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Date: 11/11/2018 8:52:00 AM
Well done lyric man. Congrats on your so deserving poem of the day.
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Date: 11/11/2018 7:35:00 AM
Very nice echoes in the wind Lyric Man..Congrats on POTD
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Date: 11/11/2018 7:24:00 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day..well done, LM.
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