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Scream To Sing

A street life scream swells into every cell of her eyes, tears of thunder find no escape into the landscape of Man so she lets the burning rain rampage upon her frustrated soul, she feels no mercy tonight asks for no reason this is her season, her North Star, suffer like an orphan she tells herself, suffer for the sake of sanity she sighs, a smile of defiance dances for a moment across her forlorn face as she realizes sharply that to scream inside is to prepare to sing outside, she understands her song now, now she's ready to sing instead of scream, she has discovered the voice of Trinity J.A.B. 2021

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Alesia Leach

Date: 4/21/2025 8:58:00 AM

J.A.B., this one burns with truth and then sings with it. “Tears of thunder find no escape…” that image alone gripped me, but it’s the moment she realizes that her scream is just the beginning of her song that took my breath away. There’s so much power in choosing to sing--especially after everything that tries to silence you. And that final line… “She has discovered the voice of Trinity.” Pure poetic resurrection. This is strength, this is spirit, and this is soul-sound. Beautiful work. Alesia

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/21/2025 11:52:00 AM

She takes control of her pain, of her poetry...your thoughts really excite me Alesia...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/11/2021 6:08:00 AM

"as she realizes sharply that to scream inside is to prepare to sing outside" another fascinating piece Justin. Sometimes a scream is more satisfying than a melodic phrase...but our tastes change, our lives change, our journey changes..always becoming. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/20/2022 8:55:00 PM

Your metaphysics are a melody to me Laura. You understand this metamorphosis like an angel knows the tears of sacrifice...J.A.B.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/23/2021 4:03:00 PM

Ahh - hauntingly beautiful Justin. :) Linda

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/20/2022 8:53:00 PM

Her trauma is her triumph Linda...your feelings are sweet to me...J.A.B.