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Scowl of Displeasure

And the sky brightened and the moon sang songs. The mood setting fraught with many more wrongs. Anne wore dark sunglasses. Music’s like molasses. The full moon kept her up all night long. 3/2/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2018 6:25:00 PM

Oh, that was fun, it reminded me of that old song: I wear my sunglasses at night!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2018 6:10:00 PM

Lol. It works. Great limerick with lovely imagery and grest scenario.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2018 6:11:00 PM

Thanks, Line!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/2/2018 9:51:00 AM

I can hear Anne now complaining about the music, sticky and sweet, and flowing falteringly; the moon’s disregard for her pleasure. She’s likely bothered by someone snoring nearby and others partying next door. Love your imagery and the scenarios it inspires.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2018 4:27:00 PM

Thanks, Reason! I also enjoy hearing what incites the reader has :)