Scowl of Displeasure

And the sky brightened and the moon sang songs.
The mood setting fraught with many more wrongs.
Anne wore dark sunglasses.
Music’s like molasses.
The full moon kept her up all night long.

3/2/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Oh, that was fun, it reminded me of that old song: I wear my sunglasses at night!
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Lol. It works. Great limerick with lovely imagery and grest scenario.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Thanks, Line!
Poteet Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 9:51 AM
I can hear Anne now complaining about the music, sticky and sweet, and flowing falteringly; the moon’s disregard for her pleasure. She’s likely bothered by someone snoring nearby and others partying next door. Love your imagery and the scenarios it inspires.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Thanks, Reason! I also enjoy hearing what incites the reader has :)
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