Scorn

Sorry she exposed her vulnerability she’s getting the cold shoulder recognizing it all too well totally undeserved it upsets her mostly since she’s guilty of it herself on someone in her past who didn’t deserve it either and she’s sorry but won’t make amends she sucks it up full circle rather live with the guilt AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on June 14, 2019

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/18/2019 7:12:00 AM

Humbleness would be the answer, but how many know how to even spell the word - pride, a bitter pill to swallow, Hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/18/2019 7:13:00 AM

Yes certainly... Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jennifer.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/16/2019 3:27:00 PM

Great poem, Line: But as the bible says , Pride goest before the fall!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2019 11:28:00 AM

wow, full circle. Sad that some people can't make amends!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2019 11:39:00 AM

Yes. Sad indeed, Andrea.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/16/2019 7:13:00 AM

This rings true. I’m sure all can relate in one way or another.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2019 11:39:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/15/2019 5:44:00 PM

This sounds like someone I know very well who is a part of my life. Pride keeps them from admitting their faults. I can certainly relate. Well said! : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/15/2019 7:12:00 PM

Yes there is always one around, Connie.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/14/2019 9:10:00 PM

This is so true, Line, I have been there myself: "it upsets her mostly since she’s guilty of it herself on someone in her past" Wonderful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2019 9:12:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.