Jan Allison Poet Choka

Scintillating Sunlight

Golden sunlight rays
Dancing on aqua blue sea
Tangoing on the water
Seductive glimmer
Moving harmoniously
Nature's beauty captivates


09~18~14
Contest: Choka Me
Sponsor Dr Ram Mehta
Structure 5,7,7,5,7,7
~awarded 2nd place ~

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James Fraser October 23, 2014 at 4:25 PM A sunlight I'd be delighted to be beneath whilst reading your words sipping a chilling Chardonnay. I so enjoy reading your poetry, James xxx James Fraser October 23, 2014 at 4:58 PM I always look back at previous poems, because there are always Gems, James xx Jan Allison October 23, 2014 at 4:29 PM Thank you so much James. It's lovely when someone comments on an older poem you wrote some time back:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Elisabeth Sheaffer October 3, 2014 at 3:30 AM Beautiful. It's as smooth as silk. Thanks. Jan Allison October 3, 2014 at 3:33 AM Thanks so much for dropping by with your lovely comment Elizabeth:-) hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans September 30, 2014 at 12:24 PM Congratulations on your win Jan. I just noticed I wasn't in here giving my congratulations on this contest. Jan Allison September 30, 2014 at 12:33 PM Many thanks for your lovely comment Brenda i really appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xxx

Ma Yaseen September 28, 2014 at 4:20 AM Congrats for your friend Jan.... Keep going,, malik Jan Allison September 28, 2014 at 6:04 AM Many thanks for the lovely comment Malik:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud September 28, 2014 at 1:25 AM feel like dancing, jan.. yes!.. cheers on your sparkling win.. huggs Jan Allison September 28, 2014 at 3:09 AM I can't believe the success I'm having and how I have grown in a few short months:-) hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2014 at 9:26 PM Love the imagery. The first part using dancing was very creative! BIG congrats to you. Jan Allison September 28, 2014 at 3:08 AM Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xxx

Barbara Gorelick September 27, 2014 at 6:18 PM Very nice, I agree with DEb, Tangoing on the water is a great phrase. Congrats. BG Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 6:19 PM Thanks so much Barbara:-) hugs Jan xxxx

Debbie Guzzi September 27, 2014 at 4:00 PM Oh Jan tangoing on the water! Congrad's Light & Love Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 4:02 PM Many thanks for dropping by Debbie:-) hugs jan xxx

John Lawless September 27, 2014 at 9:17 AM A tango at sunset. Well done, Jan. Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 11:05 AM many thanks for dropping by John:-) hugs jan xxx

Abdul Malik Mandani September 27, 2014 at 9:05 AM congrats Jan. Very nice. Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 11:04 AM Thanks Abdul:-) hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 8:34 AM As does this poem, a captivating write. Congratulations Jan. Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 8:50 AM Many thanks for the lovely comment Richard:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne September 27, 2014 at 7:36 AM !!!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!! Another huge win for you Jan. Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 7:54 AM Thanks Maurice :-) hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith September 27, 2014 at 6:18 AM Congrats Jan...a huge win...hugs Tim Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 7:53 AM Thanks as ever for your continued support and friendship Tim:-) Hugs jan xxx

Faye Gibson September 27, 2014 at 6:12 AM Tangoing on the water... lovely, Jan. Congrats. Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 7:53 AM Thanks Faye I'm dancing on air at the moment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus September 27, 2014 at 6:01 AM This goes to prove that Jan can move with ease from humour to poetic beauty!:) Well done Jan....and congrats on a very merited win. Hugs // paul Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 7:52 AM Paul that comment has simply made my day:-) thank you so much! Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 27, 2014 at 4:57 AM And back again wid huge congrats on ur winning superb write Jan. Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 5:10 AM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 27, 2014 at 1:59 AM Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Jan Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 2:19 AM Thank you SO much for the 2nd place I am absolutely delighted with this win:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Dorian Petersen Potter September 19, 2014 at 2:39 PM Well done Jan! xxxx D. Jan Allison September 19, 2014 at 3:11 PM Thanks Dorian:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2014 at 10:18 PM Dr. Ram will love this descriptive one. SO pretty, Jan! Jan Allison September 19, 2014 at 1:53 AM Thanks Andrea i hope he likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans September 18, 2014 at 6:25 PM Jan, I would say this is excellent. I love everything about it. Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 6:26 PM thanks so much Brenda for your supportive comments:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 12:41 PM I love the word scintillating. That's a big word like marmalade. Brenda Meier-Hans September 18, 2014 at 6:22 PM Bahahahaha Maurice, that's so funny. Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 1:09 PM Marmalade is a delicious word Maurice:-) I just fancy some on toast now after your comment LOL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne September 18, 2014 at 12:40 PM This is beautiful Jan. I hope you place high in the contest. Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 1:08 PM Thanks Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2014 at 3:13 AM - Jan, this is really beautiful - I wish you good luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 3:34 AM Thanks for your continued support Anne Lise I do appreciate it:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 18, 2014 at 2:29 AM Wow that's amazing Jan ! Love the dancing aqua blue sea! Good luck dear! Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 3:33 AM Thanks Dr Sharma its my first attempt at this form:-) Hugs jan xx

Liam Mcdaid September 17, 2014 at 7:41 PM very beautifully drawn picture Jan Allison September 18, 2014 at 12:58 AM Thanks Liam:-) hugs Jan xx

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