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Scintillating Sunlight

Golden sunlight rays Dancing on aqua blue sea Tangoing on the water Seductive glimmer Moving harmoniously Nature's beauty captivates 09~18~14 Contest: Choka Me Sponsor Dr Ram Mehta Structure 5,7,7,5,7,7 ~awarded 2nd place ~

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James Fraser

Date: 10/23/2014 4:25:00 PM

A sunlight I'd be delighted to be beneath whilst reading your words sipping a chilling Chardonnay. I so enjoy reading your poetry, James xxx

James Fraser
Date: 10/23/2014 4:58:00 PM

I always look back at previous poems, because there are always Gems, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 4:29:00 PM

Thank you so much James. It's lovely when someone comments on an older poem you wrote some time back:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Elisabeth Sheaffer

Date: 10/3/2014 3:30:00 AM

Beautiful. It's as smooth as silk. Thanks.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2014 3:33:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by with your lovely comment Elizabeth:-) hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/30/2014 12:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Jan. I just noticed I wasn't in here giving my congratulations on this contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2014 12:33:00 PM

Many thanks for your lovely comment Brenda i really appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xxx

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/28/2014 4:20:00 AM

Congrats for your friend Jan.... Keep going,, malik

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2014 6:04:00 AM

Many thanks for the lovely comment Malik:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2014 1:25:00 AM

feel like dancing, jan.. yes!.. cheers on your sparkling win.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2014 3:09:00 AM

I can't believe the success I'm having and how I have grown in a few short months:-) hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:26:00 PM

Love the imagery. The first part using dancing was very creative! BIG congrats to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2014 3:08:00 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xxx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/27/2014 6:18:00 PM

Very nice, I agree with DEb, Tangoing on the water is a great phrase. Congrats. BG

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 6:19:00 PM

Thanks so much Barbara:-) hugs Jan xxxx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/27/2014 4:00:00 PM

Oh Jan tangoing on the water! Congrad's Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 4:02:00 PM

Many thanks for dropping by Debbie:-) hugs jan xxx

John Lawless

Date: 9/27/2014 9:17:00 AM

A tango at sunset. Well done, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 11:05:00 AM

many thanks for dropping by John:-) hugs jan xxx

Abdul Malik

Date: 9/27/2014 9:05:00 AM

congrats Jan. Very nice.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 11:04:00 AM

Thanks Abdul:-) hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2014 8:34:00 AM

As does this poem, a captivating write. Congratulations Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 8:50:00 AM

Many thanks for the lovely comment Richard:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 7:36:00 AM

!!!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!! Another huge win for you Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Maurice :-) hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/27/2014 6:18:00 AM

Congrats Jan...a huge win...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 7:53:00 AM

Thanks as ever for your continued support and friendship Tim:-) Hugs jan xxx

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/27/2014 6:12:00 AM

Tangoing on the water... lovely, Jan. Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 7:53:00 AM

Thanks Faye I'm dancing on air at the moment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2014 6:01:00 AM

This goes to prove that Jan can move with ease from humour to poetic beauty!:) Well done Jan....and congrats on a very merited win. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 7:52:00 AM

Paul that comment has simply made my day:-) thank you so much! Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/27/2014 4:57:00 AM

And back again wid huge congrats on ur winning superb write Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 5:10:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2014 1:59:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2014 2:19:00 AM

Thank you SO much for the 2nd place I am absolutely delighted with this win:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/19/2014 2:39:00 PM

Well done Jan! xxxx D.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/19/2014 3:11:00 PM

Thanks Dorian:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2014 10:18:00 PM

Dr. Ram will love this descriptive one. SO pretty, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/19/2014 1:53:00 AM

Thanks Andrea i hope he likes it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/18/2014 6:25:00 PM

Jan, I would say this is excellent. I love everything about it.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 6:26:00 PM

thanks so much Brenda for your supportive comments:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/18/2014 12:41:00 PM

I love the word scintillating. That's a big word like marmalade.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/18/2014 6:22:00 PM

Bahahahaha Maurice, that's so funny.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 1:09:00 PM

Marmalade is a delicious word Maurice:-) I just fancy some on toast now after your comment LOL:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/18/2014 12:40:00 PM

This is beautiful Jan. I hope you place high in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 1:08:00 PM

Thanks Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2014 3:13:00 AM

- Jan, this is really beautiful - I wish you good luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 3:34:00 AM

Thanks for your continued support Anne Lise I do appreciate it:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/18/2014 2:29:00 AM

Wow that's amazing Jan ! Love the dancing aqua blue sea! Good luck dear!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 3:33:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma its my first attempt at this form:-) Hugs jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/17/2014 7:41:00 PM

very beautifully drawn picture

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2014 12:58:00 AM

Thanks Liam:-) hugs Jan xx