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School Head-Captain

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School Head-Captain

Below are the majority views of students about to vote
for their next high school head-captain: 


Nelson:

He is tall and handsome,
plays for our basketball team,
knows the best bars in town,
hates maths, just like us.


Pitt:

He's shy,
hates proms and games,
he's a nerd,
he wears heavy glasses


Charlie:

He's a perv and a chain smoker,
heavy metal is his friend,
never talks much,
but rocks in raving!


Kelvin:

An "A" material, and spends more time
in the library than in bed.
He believes in extraterrestrials.
We think he should visit a shrink or something....


Hosea:

He's very smart and funny,
active in spoken word,
hates politicking,
certain for a scholarship,
very good with skateboards....

................................................................................

Hosea made the cut,
but forcefully. Majority
of students threatened 
that they would steal his
skateboards, if he didn't
stand for the coveted position
as the head-captain......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 5/11/2017 2:04:00 PM
Three cheers to Hosea!Great one Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/15/2017 8:46:00 AM
Hehe. Thank you so much Sara, for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 3/22/2017 6:09:00 PM
what a clever way to do this challenge. I just saw a movie about a kid that resembled your Hosea!! Good luck to you in the contest
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/26/2017 3:57:00 AM
Wow! I would love to see that movie!!!Thank you for enjoying my piece, Andrea!! *^_^*
Date: 3/22/2017 8:29:00 AM
I'm also glad Hosea won. Nicely penned, Teddy, T.J
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/26/2017 3:54:00 AM
Hehehe. He's a cool teen. Thanks for enjoying my piece, T.J :-)
Date: 3/22/2017 4:27:00 AM
Well thought out poem. Incredible how we see a person so differently. Glad Hosea won.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2017 6:40:00 AM
Hahaha. Certainly, Victor!! We all see people differently, as the same people see us differently..... I'm glad too, that Hosea won!!! ;-)
Date: 3/21/2017 7:57:00 AM
Great fun poem Teddy I am glad Hosea made the cut:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/22/2017 6:36:00 AM
Hehehe. Thanks, Jan!! *^_^* Hosea is lucky and unlucky at the same time, lolest.