Ken Carroll Poet Free verse

School Girl Crush

She asked,
girlfriend #1,2 or three
what number am I?
Don't you love me?
All the other girls
break your heart.

Will you be my one love?
My one and only?

Say, "I love you"
From me to you is weird
From you to me
is a dream come true.
 
3 is a crowd
1 is lonely
2 is just right.

When our eyes meet
I know it is not just fate
for us to be together
it is destiny.

I didn't believe
in love at first sight
until I met you.

For my eyes
I see only you
Just to hear one day
that you love me.

You and me = one big happily ever after

She said
love is a fiery torch
love is war
and love is hell.

I will steal you
from your lady.

You want me to love you?
your wish is my command...

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Robin Davis October 19, 2013 at 9:09 AM Ken Great write. The reader can feel the intensity of your crush and the hopefulness the feelings are returned. Nice job Have a great day Ken Carroll October 19, 2013 at 9:13 AM Hi Robin, Thank you for a lovely visit.. Ken

Cecilia Macfarlane October 7, 2013 at 9:52 AM Love is hell....so true but also amazing when your in it with a person that feels the same. Terrific write. Hugs Ken Carroll October 7, 2013 at 9:58 AM Thank you Cecilia..

Nette Onclaud October 6, 2013 at 11:42 AM first hint of romance will never be forgotten, ken... charming and truant at the same time.. i like!..:) huggs Ken Carroll October 6, 2013 at 12:51 PM Hey Nette, Thanks for visiting.. Ken

Eileen Manassian October 4, 2013 at 5:37 PM Very interesting write....ah....a crush...you portrayed it well. :-) Ken Carroll October 4, 2013 at 10:11 PM Hi Eileen, thank you for reading this one..

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2013 at 2:25 PM - Sweet time... and sweet poem, Ken ! - - Have a beautiful weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ken Carroll October 4, 2013 at 10:10 PM Hi Anne, Thank you for the beautiful comment.

Laura Breidenthal October 4, 2013 at 12:29 AM Great passion in this one. Nicely written. Straight from the heart. Great job! Always, Laura Ken Carroll October 4, 2013 at 10:10 PM Hi Laura, Thank you for visiting..

Liam Mcdaid October 3, 2013 at 3:58 PM lovely piece of writing as usual my dear friend Ken Carroll October 3, 2013 at 4:10 PM Hey Liam, Thanks buddy. Ken