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School Girl Crush

She asked, girlfriend #1,2 or three what number am I? Don't you love me? All the other girls break your heart. Will you be my one love? My one and only? Say, "I love you" From me to you is weird From you to me is a dream come true. 3 is a crowd 1 is lonely 2 is just right. When our eyes meet I know it is not just fate for us to be together it is destiny. I didn't believe in love at first sight until I met you. For my eyes I see only you Just to hear one day that you love me. You and me = one big happily ever after She said love is a fiery torch love is war and love is hell. I will steal you from your lady. You want me to love you? your wish is my command...

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Date: 10/19/2013 9:09:00 AM
Ken Great write. The reader can feel the intensity of your crush and the hopefulness the feelings are returned. Nice job Have a great day
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Date: 10/19/2013 9:13:00 AM
Hi Robin, Thank you for a lovely visit.. Ken
Date: 10/7/2013 9:52:00 AM
Love is hell....so true but also amazing when your in it with a person that feels the same. Terrific write. Hugs
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Date: 10/7/2013 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Cecilia..
Date: 10/6/2013 11:42:00 AM
first hint of romance will never be forgotten, ken... charming and truant at the same time.. i like!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/6/2013 12:51:00 PM
Hey Nette, Thanks for visiting.. Ken
Date: 10/4/2013 5:37:00 PM
Very interesting write....ah....a crush...you portrayed it well. :-)
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Date: 10/4/2013 10:11:00 PM
Hi Eileen, thank you for reading this one..
Date: 10/4/2013 2:25:00 PM
- Sweet time... and sweet poem, Ken ! - - Have a beautiful weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2013 10:10:00 PM
Hi Anne, Thank you for the beautiful comment.
Date: 10/4/2013 12:29:00 AM
Great passion in this one. Nicely written. Straight from the heart. Great job! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/4/2013 10:10:00 PM
Hi Laura, Thank you for visiting..
Date: 10/3/2013 3:58:00 PM
lovely piece of writing as usual my dear friend
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Ken Carroll
Date: 10/3/2013 4:10:00 PM
Hey Liam, Thanks buddy. Ken

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