Schizophrenia Pt2

I enjoy poping pills and listening to rock-n-roll./ Especially when I want to let go and lose control./ I know the alleged assassin that was hidden in the grassy knoll./ I saw him clearly when peaking out my hole./ I smoke marijuana and bob my head to hip-hop./ I love drugs and refuse to stop./ I am fueled by the energy./ I even brake-dance when the mood seizes me./ I heard the heavy weight title was up for grabs./ I'm gonna smoke some pot, give the champ a shot then go to rehab!/ There's nothing left to say./ The jury convicted me so I'm going away./ I'm in a primal rage./ The state wants to throw me in a cage./ I thought it was a brilliant crime./ It had to be perfectly timed./ Because I knew I would finish last, I blew-up the finish line!/ Was written to be "darkly humorous" This piece shows my humor and morbid personality. And yes it is "spoken word" :) My favorite form of poetry. For those who have never seen, heard a "spoken word poet" I urge you to google/lookup "clips of spoken word poets"... I'm curious to hear opinions (criticism) on this piece. Thank you ....Jimmy