Schizophrenia Pt2

I enjoy poping pills and listening to rock-n-roll./
Especially when I want to let go and lose control./
       I know the alleged assassin that was hidden in the grassy knoll./
I saw him clearly when peaking out my hole./
       I smoke marijuana and bob my head to hip-hop./
I love drugs and refuse to stop./
       I am fueled by the energy./ I even brake-dance when the mood seizes me./
I heard the heavy weight title was up for grabs./
       I'm gonna smoke some pot, give the champ a shot then go to rehab!/
There's nothing left to say./ The jury convicted me so I'm going away./
       I'm in a primal rage./ The state wants to throw me in a cage./
I thought it was a brilliant crime./
       It had to be perfectly timed./
Because I knew I would finish last,  I blew-up the finish line!/




Was written to be "darkly humorous" This piece shows my humor and morbid personality.
And yes it is "spoken word" :) My favorite form of poetry. For those who have never seen, 
heard a "spoken word poet"  I urge you to google/lookup "clips of spoken word poets"...
I'm curious to hear opinions (criticism) on this piece.  Thank you ....Jimmy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Chircop Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 2:34 AM
You are darklyyyyyyyyyyyy humurous,,and naughty:)...in the poem..Good boy.!.behave.!!.excellent part one and two,dont know how i missed them..Charma
Haick Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 1:09 PM
Your talent shows through your writing, Jimmy! Use it everyday, if possible! Peace, Audrey
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace