Emile Pinet Poet Quatrain

Schizophrenia

If only I could ease
your misery and pain.
And take you to where you'll
never suffer again.

Schizophrenia feels
like someone's in your head.
And I know there are times
that you wished you were dead.

To you, the boogeyman
is much more than a myth.
And sometimes, your voices
are all you are left with.

A warped reality
makes it hard to be strong.
For you're not always sure
that there's anything wrong.

You fall into disdain,
no matter what you do.
And you wonder if God
understands; your heart's true.

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Line Gauthier March 14, 2018 at 1:25 PM A very emotionally compassionate write, Emile. Love your last stanza. Emile Pinet March 14, 2018 at 1:45 PM Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.

Darren White May 17, 2017 at 2:08 PM Emile, I found your poem because I was searching for Miraj and found his referral to your poem. I am not schizophrenic, but I have a number of conditions that from time to time land me in a psychosis during depression, and I find myself in mental hospitals regularly. I am writing a small light poetry series about that. I understand your son suffers this terrible disease. Your poem is incredible, and I recognize every single line there.... I wish you all the best. Darren.

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2015 at 4:54 PM It's a very sad disease. My dad is 84 now with it still. It ruined his life. Sad for those that get it. Emile Pinet September 28, 2015 at 8:50 AM Thanks Andrea, nature can be cruel, my best to your dad... and may I say that I am impressed with your compassionate heart, most people who have had to deal with this sickness in their family tend to be more frustrated than understanding. My son, like your dad continues to suffer with his demons. Emile.

Kp Nunez September 26, 2015 at 9:33 PM There is such deep understanding in this write. You are perceptive of the workings within the heart and mind of the victim. Great write, Emile. 7. Emile Pinet September 27, 2015 at 10:19 AM Thanks Kim, I appreciate your wonderful comments. Emile.

Laura Breidenthal September 26, 2015 at 2:34 PM A most touching poem, Emile, especially those ending lines. Superb compassion! Always, Laura Emile Pinet September 27, 2015 at 10:18 AM Thanks Laura, I appreciate your visit and kind words. Emile.

Alexis Y. September 26, 2015 at 12:26 PM Emile, I agree with the others below me. I have witnessed this condition first hand.It was nothing I read about( however I did read up on it later). I have close family members that have been diagnosed with this illness.You feel so helpless whenyou can't help your loved one that's suffering this illness. You have capured the mind set really well:-) Alexis 7 Emile Pinet September 27, 2015 at 10:11 AM Thanks so much Alexis, I appreciate your insightful comments. Emile.

Constance La France September 26, 2015 at 11:57 AM Emile, you captured this condition well in your write, sadly it effects so many people in the world. 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, cracked and fragmented, my writing skill changed drastically after a near death experience in 2012 all of a sudden I was a poet not just a writer of words .. I was forever changed Emile Pinet September 26, 2015 at 12:16 PM Thanks Broken Wings, I appreciate your visit and your personal comments, may your pen never run out of ink. Emile.

Michael Tor September 26, 2015 at 9:38 AM Cleverly written Emile. I'm glad you brought this subject in the light. Wonderful write. I see it touched Miraj. something at least good came out of this challenging illness, my heart goes out to its's victims. A 7 my friend. Who says poets can't help others with their writings. Here is an example of that. Congratulations for making the difference in someones life Emile!!! Emile Pinet September 26, 2015 at 11:26 AM Thank so much Michael, your words have honored me with your praise. Emile. Michael Tor September 26, 2015 at 9:39 AM I also applaud Miraj's courage for sharing as a victim.

Miraj Raha September 26, 2015 at 8:55 AM I'm the first one to comment.As a victim,I truly relate to this piece and the horror it entails.I so hope this was written for me as I can truly recognize every line to its truest meaning.Brilliant write Sir. Emile Pinet September 26, 2015 at 9:10 AM Thank you so much Miraj, for your frank and honest review, you are not alone anymore, the world recognizes your demons at last. Emile.