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For millennia, our race has lived a vast success. Hatred, envy, spite, and strife are on the rise. Despair, aggressiveness, self-centeredness. Depravity, intrigue, lewdness, vanity, despise. Hubris, a lack of self-awareness, and trickery. Aristotle's five components have been corrupted. Air, water, earth, and fire are no longer ancillary. Humbly wished to stay alive rather than dead. When I think back on all I've been through, it all seems insane. There doesn't seem to be any way for me to heal. Even if I tried, I'd never been able to reach or even get obscene. On a detail level hit, I was wounded in the deepest part of my soul. It seems clear to me now that my fate was set by my disputes. Before it was too early in the process, I tried tentatively. They've formed outflow and false analogies without any roots When I had all the talent and drive, I regret not doing it smoothly. They think they will be able to detain me after a full investigation They make me feel scared with all they perform I demonstrated to them that they could inflict pain and dejection They're alleging in the flood that they lied about the game. As a leader, I cannot assert that logic will guide my word. They exhibit how to rule for the benefit of their family. They did, however, get the human falsity award. They're simply playing badly and misleading the community. However, it's excessively various to decide. You dared to contact that one strand. You aren't aware when you alter your face. It turns into such a terror-like experience. It's going to last a period, you accept. For the first time, you've been right. It's the unique last time indefinitely. You were harmed, and you stumbled struck poorly. It felt agreeable yet surprising. You said that you felt humiliated over increasing. Pause for a minute to consider; it appears it's an act of futility. When it got back to sobbing in the downpour, the storm faded away. This time, everything had changed after much sorrow. You never know when one door will shut, and another will open.  All the regime crashed, and I'm now being hailed as a hero.  Life is a journey, not a destination; without patience, no gain
Written: June 29, 2021 A broken person Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal

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Date: 7/26/2021 12:47:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Delighted am I with your last line: "Life is a journey, not a destination; without patience, no gain." God bless you.
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Date: 7/25/2021 9:32:00 AM
This is so wonderfully written Lasaad. I am so glad you didn't leave us in the litany of darkness but raised us up in your final lines. Congratulations on your win and to all of the "heros" who leave the storm in the life journey. Blessings to you!
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Date: 7/25/2021 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam, I appreciate your kind words and delightful thoughts. My very best wishes and blessings.
Date: 7/25/2021 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Love your line, "Life is a journey, not a destination; without patience, no gain" So True. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 7/25/2021 12:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula, you did very well as well, blessings and kindest regards
Date: 7/9/2021 4:15:00 AM
"They did, however, get the human falsity award. They're simply playing badly and misleading the community." You are outing them in a wonderfully honest way!
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Date: 7/9/2021 5:49:00 AM
Appreciate your sweet words dear Caren, you’re so kind. Thanks
Date: 6/30/2021 1:05:00 AM
You touched our sore spots and unfortunately, we have no wish to revise our behaviour.
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Date: 6/30/2021 6:56:00 AM
So true, we always think that we are going great, but like you said we’re not ready to change yet. Kindest regards my friend
Date: 6/29/2021 12:59:00 PM
Extremely well-written, Lasaad, and I wish you the very best in Faraz's contest. You have written a very thought-provoking poem.
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Date: 6/29/2021 7:12:00 PM
Lasaad, you have NOT annoyed me at all. I enjoy your kind and thoughtful comments and your commitment to writing excellent poetry.
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Date: 6/29/2021 1:11:00 PM
I am very grateful, Milton. Your compliment enriched the appeal of my poem. I regret if I annoyed you. I would trust your opinion, and I believe you are in a challenging position assessing contests, creating poetry, and commenting, not to mention our everyday life: blessings and kindest regards.