Scheherazade's Throat Vessels of Time

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*Image of Hourglass Shattered Broken by Pixabay. Scheherazade's throat vessels of time snuffed clock prostrate hands desert coarse sands moods travels hollow cracked glass loafs 2021 July 03 *1st Place* A Brian Strand July 13 ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 July 12

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2021 1:19:00 PM

Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/17/2021 1:31:00 PM

A note of thanks, Sara, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 11:28:00 PM

Beautiful Hiku with live imagery. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/12/2021 11:41:00 PM

I appreciate your visit, Aloha!

Suzette Richards

Date: 7/4/2021 5:58:00 AM

The image you portray with your concise description is very arresting. Loved this. Also, the title is very original: I can visualize an hourglass chocking on the sands of time as time passes inexorably for us all.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/4/2021 8:57:00 PM

Cheers!!

Suzette Richards
Date: 7/4/2021 7:51:00 PM

I now removed the "CV". It was for your eyes only. Thank you for the compliment, William. :))

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/4/2021 12:13:00 PM

Apologies, the notification icon vanished as I busied myself blogging. Wow, your insights are exceptionally worded, trusting you are a teacher of English (excusing my Wow). You humble me truly my friend, Aloha!