Scentsuality Isn'T Scentsible

So there I was
Just minding my own business
Not bothering anybody

Nor wishing to be bothered…..

Didn’t think I could be
Bothered, that is
‘Cause for sure I had it down this
Time, with all its waxing and waning
Its swelling and receding
Its heights and depths and breadths

Nothing, really.

Everything under control.
Polished and smooth and oh so
Solid and real safe
Cozy
In a safe kind of way.

Never mind the artificial
Light, the artificial flowers thrive
Anyway.

Don’t they look nice?

The wind is relentless.
Sneaky, too.
Finding the itsy-bitsiest
Surface cracks with breezes pretending to be
Gentle.

It blew in a dream last night and I don’t know
If it was about here we go or
Here we go again.
I woke to wisps
Of rose and lilac and honeysuckle
In the air, pulsing and wafting
Reminding me of my heart beating in
Time

Smells nice.  But some light snuck in too
And it’s making me
Squint.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 5/26/2013 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Have yourself a beautiful Memorial Day, this Monday. God bless * Always~ LINDA
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Date: 5/25/2013 8:36:00 AM
WOW... love your style and expression. Your poem made me want to read more from the beginning line, all the way through to the fantastic ending. Matter-of-factly stated and artfully created. :) Found it on the featured poems list and I'm very glad that I did.
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Date: 5/20/2013 11:35:00 AM
Kind of off-the-cuff style I like - the pain of stark reality, only just an itsy bitsy. Love, daver
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