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Notes About The Poem

The composition of this poem was inspired by the contest on Italian Sestet by Nette Onclaud.

 

Scents of My Kiss

"A Missed Poem"



Our mem’ries linger in my mind

As I sail alone now my love

Please touch me if you are around

My love for you is so divine

These three candles as white as dove

Scents of my kiss for you abound





Nov. 8, 2013  9.44 pm


By Leonora Galinta
Form: Italian Sestet





Note: 

I imagined the 3 lighted candles in the picture  are the scented ones and  3 means  I Love You;))))  The beautiful painting had inspired  me to try another form of poem. I hope I did it right. This was intended for a contest but it was few minutes late;))

Second Place
Contest: Missed Poems
Judged: 3/12/14
Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta

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Paul Callus November 5, 2015 at 4:13 PM Hi Leonora! Decided to take a look at one of your older poems, and I have not been disappointed! This is short, but beautiful and romantic in content...my type of poetry:) (I love the accompanying picture, too!) Hugs // paul Len Gasun November 14, 2015 at 9:26 AM Hugs back to you my dear friend! Len Gasun November 14, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thank you so much my very dear friend Paul for your kindness and unwavering encouragement and support. More power and blessings!

Funom Makama February 16, 2015 at 12:53 PM This is beautiful and nicely crafted. Thanks for the share... Sometimes its refreshing visiting old poems of soupers... Its amazing, the freshness which comes from doing this... And that is exactly my enjoyment visiting this piece

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 21, 2015 at 12:09 PM This one Great Leonora/Love>rajat

James Fraser June 30, 2014 at 1:01 PM Love the title Leonora, followed by this delight to read as my mind images your words, smiles, James :)

Skat A March 14, 2014 at 1:05 PM hello, Sweet Leonora, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT

Nette Onclaud March 12, 2014 at 3:22 PM wow lory... this is makes my heart flutter!.. beautifully rendered, dear one!.. applause to you for a fine win!.. huggs

Roger Horsch March 12, 2014 at 11:23 AM Hi Leonora, I don't know how this poem could have ever been missed. It is just beautiful. Congrats on your win......Hugs.....Roger

Dr.Ram Mehta March 12, 2014 at 6:24 AM Congratulations on a fine win in my contest and thanks for the participation, Leo

Sandra Adams November 17, 2013 at 7:53 PM this is sensual and yet sad...i see it as he has passed and she hopeful that he is always near her...more than just in heart...eternally....enjoyed reading this one...lovely write :) hugs

Debbie Guzzi November 17, 2013 at 6:30 PM Three is a powerful number CREATION Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux November 17, 2013 at 12:09 PM Good morning Leonora.

Anna-Marie Docherty November 17, 2013 at 8:02 AM reaches right out and touches the very heart of the reader... truly romantic and fitting...

Bukang Liwayway November 16, 2013 at 12:57 AM very romantic....love it..:) ) thanks for sharing my dear friend :) ;) have a blessed weekend ;) hugs.

Skat A November 10, 2013 at 9:47 PM I very much enjoyed, Leonora, nice loving touch..................SKAT Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:20 AM TYSM my dearest sis and friend Skat.

Ken Carroll November 10, 2013 at 3:21 PM Hi Leonora, A most sensual write! Ken Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:19 AM TYSM my dear friend Ken.

Nette Onclaud November 10, 2013 at 9:08 AM hi, lorry.. this is a splendid piece...awwh, i too got surprised with the turn--out... a winner this one.. hope your family here are fine... take care and big hugs..:) Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:18 AM TYSM my dear friend Nette. It's alright, no problem. The most important for me is learning and trying. I'm so glad you, your family and my family are fine. Big hugs!

Poet. Undertaker November 10, 2013 at 8:04 AM Galinta move ahead. Time has a great role to do with your memories. with undying spirit, challenging attitude move towards your goal in life. (: ) Jenish. Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 8:55 AM ;)))))) ok, thanks my dear friend.

Cindy Lu November 9, 2013 at 11:16 PM My friend Irma miss destroyer herself postedyour poem on facebook (we're friends there... Lucinda Cayton I really love poetry that uses simple language usage yet breaks the barriers of common perceptions of the language. Interpretation is up top the reader. I could read this over and over and get a good meaning of the art of your poem every time, perhaps it will reflect something different as we are all a bit self centered in our human shell.. Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:13 AM Ops, thanks also a lot for your wonderful comment & first visit on my work. It's my honor as well my dear friend. More hugs! Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:11 AM I'll do my best so I can go & see the poem. By the way, what’s the title? I'll go & thank her then although I still request you to pls. extend her all my words of thanks (though words again seems not enough for me).please.. TYSM! Big hugs! Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:09 AM Oh, really? It seems that I don't find again enough words to thank her for another honor my dear friend Cindy. I wish I can remember my password on my fb soon so I can connect & view. I haven't been on fb for a long time.

Poet Destroyer A November 9, 2013 at 10:35 PM oo, Lovely -- sweet and simple :-) SIS, I love the romantic kiss lingering to be touched. I wish my mind was easily inspired. your words brought the picture painting to life. I'm so glad I stopped in to follow you comment. Glad your family and you are doing well... sending hugs and smiles... once again, thank you for the charming poem..... always & forever... BBF for life.... LINDA Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:16 AM Thank you so much for your visit & inspiring comments, your care, love and concern to family, another honor for showing my poem at fb, and everything my everdearest sis and bbf for life. Can't stop thanking you for everything. More blessings and graces to u & your love ones. lovem4evr,Leo

Richard Lamoureux November 9, 2013 at 9:26 AM Either way, we are the winners because we got to read it. Lovely piece and I enjoyed the additional note at the bottom. Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:21 AM TYSM for your your visit and inspiring comments my dear friend.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu November 9, 2013 at 8:53 AM A good one sweet dove. You don't want to teach me these new forms sestet, haiku, etc ope u will do there,want to learn from you. I love the imagery three candles representing I love you. Welcome back from your holiday,ope u had fun. Kudos and a warm day ahead! I care. Based On Belief. Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:24 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Bob. I want to however there are more poets here who're more expert than I am on different forms.;)))). I'll teach you when I've already mastered all ok. Thank you so much as well for welcoming me from my holiday. Big hugs!

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2013 at 12:52 AM Leonora. that was really great how you saw the three candles. they represent her life expiring (that's what I found out researching the picture). You picked up on that and also her longing for love. Very nice poem. Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:25 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Andrea. Big hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2013 at 12:16 PM - Leonora .... so romantic and beautiful!!! - Truly a wonderful small poem. - Wish you a nice weekend :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:26 AM Thank you so much my very dear friend Anne Lise.

Poet Tacito November 8, 2013 at 11:06 AM This was touching & engrossing. Wonderful work! Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:26 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Drake.

Kiran Bantawa November 8, 2013 at 9:41 AM lovely poem, Beautiful. Len Gasun November 12, 2013 at 9:27 AM Thank you so much my dear friend Kiran.