Scent of Childhood

At last, a darkness filled the skies
Small tufts of dust, like clouds would rise 
as the earth was kissed by welcomed rain

The rain at last, had tiptoed in
with scents forgotten, back again
We almost missed the laughter, but for leaves
That murmured quick surprise along the eaves

Late summer's breath, so sweet, so ripe
had filled the air to quench the blight
While puffs of earth, upon the ground
would mimic dandelions white and round

Explosions danced, near suntanned feet
The scent of dust, the scent of sweet, 
bouncing here and bouncing there
tossing rain-scent in the air
Summer clouds, still take me there

Brief summer storms would gently brew
and catch me in the barn to wait
until the show would come and go
I'd take the chance or hesitate

And then we'd race straight through the gate
while laughing gaily, for a plate
of cookies, warm and straight
from Grandma's oven....freshly baked

The scent of raindrops, from the loft
The scent of cookies, warm and soft
Returning summers, never lost 
where scent of rain, as August peaks,
sprouts dandelions around my feet




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Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Excellent write, Carrie. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Selfa Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 12:24 PM
I'm speechless as always when I read your works. Great pen!!! :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 3:24 PM
amazing poem and well deserved win. How in the world one like this could not have placed before is a puzzle to me.
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December 25, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
Canerdy Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 6:38 PM
I really enjoyed this lovely, exuberant poem. It's easy to see why it won. Janice
Gentry Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Congratulations on 1st place with this remarkably entertaining poem.
Curtis Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Your words are so beautifully woven together into a fabric of love, it's clothing for one's soul and keeps life's memories warm.... Best Wishes. JTC
Lindley Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 12:08 AM
A beautiful write that is sure to be a winner! One that far exceeds the requirements of the contest IMHO. Surely inspired from a very talented spirit and matching pen... BBBravoooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Horne Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:44 PM
love this, Carrie - yes, those smells can bring back such lovely memories x
A. Sharma Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:57 AM
Very sweet emotive write Carrie,, love it ,,gl in contest!
Bauer Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 7:55 PM
just beautiful, carrie! i felt like i was back there with you, all those years ago...
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