Scent of a Woman

There lives a woman
In a village of the West
Besides where lake amazes
Where torrents do crashes
Her tender hand waves the maize
To buy or eat and free your hunger
By her side lays her kits
The woods, the coals, the matches
In her eyes lives the kindness
Happy, her hut waits on her baby
The one the maize will make a maid
But the passersby, is a man of leisure
He trots, bluffs, and clutches her maize
In happiness, she gave her grace
But the man is but a load of blades
Her lace, he grooved and bolted like mice
To the runner of her treasure
Sad, the woman besides the lake
She’ll grunt, smiles and squirms!
Until her curse arrests the swine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 23, 2016 at 9:18 PM
ABIMBOLA:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~
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January 19, 2016 at 3:44 AM
Very Special thanks for sharing
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August 31, 2015 at 3:13 AM
- A great poem, Abimbola ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
Davis Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 5:42 AM
Thank you, thank you. I do appreciate.
Davis Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 2:32 AM
Thanks Anne. I'm honoured to be here.
A  Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Hi Abimbola, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Davis Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Thanks, SKAT. I'm honoured to be your friend.
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August 30, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Abimbola, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Davis Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 12:36 PM
I'm honoured and privileged to dwell among you.
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