Scenes That Speak

Painters astound with splashes and strokes.
Photographers fascinate with focus.
Me, I just write what I see:
ordinary, ready scenes.
Why? Because they like to speak,
and me, to listen, and sometimes
I understand what they want me to receive.

The snow is melting off the roof across the street
while an Asian man sweeps the hood of his car
with a blue brush, then stomps his feet.
The shrubs behind are wigged in white.
The passersby don’t see.
They walk and text a private repartee,
but still they speak to me!

A bird arcs the slate sky,
flapping its wide, white wings,
seeming to circle the whole scene.

Everything that’s given
deserves a certain dignity.

March 2, 2019
Creativity in Visual Arts Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sergi Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Very perceptive poem, Rita. My wife notices everything and takes photos. My compliments!
Gauthier Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 6:09 PM
Powerful imagery in its simplicity, Rita. Well done.
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