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EMOTIONS BOUNCE IN THE OCEAN FEELINGS ENCOMPASS THE CRAVE CREATING WAVES A SCATTERED MESS RIPPLES OF DETEST SCATTERED FEELINGS EVERYWHERE TEARS FLOW INTO THE SEA REMEMBER ME SCREAMING WITH TRANSPARENT SMILES ALL THE WHILE PLEADING WITH MIXED UP ENERGY MINGLED WITH MISERY FOR A RIGHT NOW RESCUE THIS IS AN EMERGENCY OF DEMAGED EMOTIONS WITH THE NOTION THAT SOMEONE WOULD HAVE THE COGNITIVE TO SEE THE PAIN THAT CAUSES THIS DISEASE W3HILE YOUR ANALYZING MY SOUL IS DROWNING HEAR THE SLIENT COUGHING.... I PLEAD FOR SOMEONE WITH CAPABILITIES TO HEAL MY ACHING SOUL WITH THE ENORMOUS HOLE A SCATTERED MESS.....................................

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Date: 6/18/2010 9:19:00 AM
Great Write Crystal.....Larry
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Date: 6/17/2010 5:22:00 PM
Sometime's the mess is all we have to remind us, this write is full of sorrow, you'll get through it, just have some hope and happy thought, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 6/17/2010 3:36:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2010 3:22:00 PM
Love the word usage...great flow.. Michael
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Date: 6/17/2010 3:15:00 PM
Crystal, very emotional write, Awesome
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