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Scatter Brained....

Like playing marbles losing scruples,tension mounts a force quadruple...

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Date: 8/16/2008 3:01:00 PM

Much said in these few words. Nice use of imagery to forward your message. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Farah Chamma

Date: 7/17/2008 2:07:00 PM

Mmmm... I like the rhyme and the form but honestly don't understand what it means ^^ haha! You'll explain to me when you got the time... Thanks for sharing :D TYOne, Farah

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/16/2008 1:22:00 PM

LOL! I can so relate to this title, sadly. Good one Jay. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/16/2008 8:54:00 AM

Jay I enjoyed your Senryu - great use of this form - Blessings to you always