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On flight to our Hawaii honeymoon, a beautiful young mother with cherub baby in arms expounded to us with eloquent conviction the unspoiled beauty of Hana. On arrival we checked the map and left the side trip in our mind until walking the streets of Maui we met that same woman appalled at our delay to heed her advice and indulge our senses in paradise Hana. Afraid to meet her again I convinced honey to take me to those enchanting waterfalls, rugged serene shorelines, ancient mystical forests and so he started our forty miles drive from HI-37 to a: narrowing one lane winding high mountain edge cliffs above precipice

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Date: 8/15/2017 10:25:00 AM
Truth is stranger than fiction. Also, you are good natured.
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Date: 8/4/2017 11:40:00 AM
It is indeed a beautiful place but don't ever drive that road in the dark. Congratulations on your great haibun win Frances! : )
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Date: 8/2/2017 6:25:00 PM
This is so lovely , Frances, I love the Haiku attached ... Congratulations on your win ... ~*
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Date: 8/2/2017 3:57:00 PM
Wow! Quite an interesting write! Congrats! Loved it!
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Date: 8/2/2017 3:40:00 PM
Was it worth it or not? The drop sounds breathtaking.
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Frances Schiavina
Date: 10/12/2017 3:56:00 PM
Sorry I took so long to answer. But I wouldn't do it again.