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Scary Moments

scarry moments
In the dead of the night he came to my room I was trying to sleep after finishing my reading Touched me everywhere with the lust loom Didn’t you hear? Mom, you in next room sleeping. Day after day this went on and happiness faded How couldn’t you know of things what dad did? He tucking beers, I crying silent tears unaided Mom, I’m with a child of my own dad indeed. Hearing her mama went flabbergasted a-reel Recalling her visit to a doctor with her husband Whispering to advise her to take sleeping pill Next day their dead bodies found near river band. Hey, poets you talk a great deal of poetic justice Prove me otherwise of my story of the sacrifice.
+++++++ June 2, 2014 Form: Sonnet (Contemporary) Second Place win Contest: Scary moments by Shadow **This is based on a real event I have known. Statatics: 80% of all child abusers are the father, foster father, stepfather or another relative or close family friend of the victim. Studies have found that between 11 and 20 percent of pregnancie inteenagers are a direct result of rape, while about 60 percent of teenage mothers had unwanted sexual experiences preceding their pregnancy 80% of all child abusers are the father, foster father, stepfather or another relative or close family friend of the victim.

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Date: 6/9/2014 10:06:00 AM
Dr Ram, Congrats on your Scary moment win. Thanks for sharing........Love Linda
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Date: 6/7/2014 11:36:00 PM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, Congratulations on your win. This is a troubling subject handled very well by you. Great write. Take care. Earl
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:40:00 PM
a gripping write, dr. ram.. congrats and huggs
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Date: 6/6/2014 5:41:00 PM
Unbelievable statistics. Such sad and disgusting acts. congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:00:00 PM
this is something very scary indeed and all too prevalent in today's world. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2014 8:47:00 PM
I am part of the statistics, it is a hard subject, it was untalked about when I was young. it seems society is not as closed door about it now, and we can put these bad people where they belong. Thank you for a write that deals with a tough, scary subject. Well done and well placed.
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:12:00 AM
Hi Ram congrats on 2nd place with this horrific poem happens too much ty for taking part hugs
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/5/2014 10:40:00 PM
Thanks, Shadow, for the appreciation of my poem
Date: 6/5/2014 9:22:00 AM
a very sensitive write. I agree with Jan. And congrats for the fine win. Mohan
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Date: 6/2/2014 8:15:00 AM
A sensitively written poem on the terrible subject of child abuse . Well done Dr Mehta I applaud you for writing this. Hugs Jan xx
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