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In the life of a child, stood two men and one died. Charles was the biological father. Shorty was the step-dad. Rich in love this girl was. However, there was one similar. Carrie was her mother. In her mother’s life stood two men. Both are dead. The fear has form. The girl’s mother is now gone. The similarity brings terror of a self-fulfilling prophesy. When the world becomes dark, scary moments evolve. Shorty broke his neck. Charles did as well. Jim had a hard time getting along with others. And, Carter never was in the picture. My mom and I resembled. The spirits really modelled in a wall. Scary moments have evolved. ~A True Story~ _____________________________| Penned May 16, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/9/2014 10:08:00 AM
VERLENA, Congrats on your Scary moment win. Thanks for sharing........Love Linda
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Date: 6/6/2014 6:09:00 PM
Very sad and maybe scary if it happened one after the other. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/6/2014 6:17:00 PM
Thanks for your remarks Joyce. Verlena
Date: 6/5/2014 10:08:00 PM
Sad one , not just scary. Congrats for your win, Verlena.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/5/2014 10:12:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for your congratulations. Verlena
Date: 6/5/2014 10:34:00 AM
shiver down the back Verlena good poem congrats on place ty for taking part hugs
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/5/2014 10:38:00 AM
Thanks for your consideration Shadow... Verlena
Date: 6/5/2014 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in the contest, verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/5/2014 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Ram. Verlena
Date: 5/17/2014 11:37:00 AM
Wow... that is sad and I can only imagine how a kid would fell. Excellent work, Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/17/2014 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Amy for understanding and your supportive remarks. Verlena
Date: 5/16/2014 11:59:00 PM
Dear Verlena: Good write. Lovely read. Thanks. Leon
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/17/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Leon for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 5/16/2014 8:51:00 PM
Well!! Since it says ~A True Story~ I guess it's not Fiction! Wow! I admire, sincerely, how this has been written. Great Job.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/16/2014 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Ivo for your supportive remarks and focused commentary. Verlena

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