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Scars On My Back

I have scars on my back, Scars you left. There is my blood in your hands, the hands you have open. I trusted you with my heart and myself, I trusted you`d love me,always. Now you`re hitting me, leaving me helpless. Now you`re telling me you love me worthless. I have tears in my eyes that blur out the world, I can not see my baby playing, for my eyes are swollen and closing from the pain. You promised me love, but gave me sorrow. My heart is heavy with pain yet beating with love I can not explain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/1/2015 11:49:00 PM
Karoshni, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2015 3:07:00 PM
Karoshni, this is a great Honorable Mention poem. LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2015 10:02:00 PM
Karoshni, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:37:00 PM
Karoshni, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:18:00 PM
- A moving/sad poem Karoshni, thank you for chose to share it with me - Well written ! - Welcome to P - Soup, hope there will be more writing from you in the future - I wish you good luck - A quick greeting from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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