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Scars Left Behind

Behind friendly smile and bright eyes are scars
left by raw pain and sorrow
Heart broken when love died





Seren Roberts

lost lovekimo

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Poet Destroyer A

February 7, 2013 at 10:56 AM

Seren :-) Congratulations with your deep winning poem... always~ LINDA

Seren Roberts

February 7, 2013 at 1:43 PM

thank you Linda, how are you these days? ....Seren

Olusegun Arowolo

February 7, 2013 at 1:00 AM

Beautiful and lovely piece,Seren. Great job.Congratulations on your win.

Seren Roberts

February 7, 2013 at 2:22 AM

Thank you so much ....Seren

Debbie Guzzi

February 6, 2013 at 6:59 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Seren Roberts

February 7, 2013 at 2:22 AM

Thanks Debbie ....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 6, 2013 at 4:14 AM

Congratulations Seren this so sad girl xx

Richard Lamoureux

February 5, 2013 at 6:51 PM

Congrats on win.

Seren Roberts

February 5, 2013 at 8:03 PM

Thanks Richard ....Seren

Lucilla Carrillo

January 31, 2013 at 5:16 AM

Your words are so true. Those are scars that are not easy to heal. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Seren Roberts

January 31, 2013 at 8:20 AM

Thank you Lucilla.....Seren

Wayland Bunch

January 30, 2013 at 12:52 AM

Ok the education continues. I saw the similarity between this and the haiku and had to look up the form. I like this poem alot, it's sad and powerful, probably my favorite type of poem as far as effect. I have a question if I may ask, is the form like the haiku, I mean I understand the syllables, but are the three lines like the haiku? I will do more research, but someone with personal experience is better? I am considering wandering away from my sonnets and couplets, trying some new things.

Seren Roberts

January 30, 2013 at 6:53 AM

the syllable count is 10/7/6 I just look up the form and try to obey...Seren