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Scars Left Behind

Behind friendly smile and bright eyes are scars
left by raw pain and sorrow
Heart broken when love died





Seren Roberts

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2013 10:56:00 AM

Seren :-) Congratulations with your deep winning poem... always~ LINDA

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/7/2013 1:43:00 PM

thank you Linda, how are you these days? ....Seren

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 2/7/2013 1:00:00 AM

Beautiful and lovely piece,Seren. Great job.Congratulations on your win.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/7/2013 2:22:00 AM

Thank you so much ....Seren

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/6/2013 6:59:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/7/2013 2:22:00 AM

Thanks Debbie ....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/6/2013 4:14:00 AM

Congratulations Seren this so sad girl xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/5/2013 6:51:00 PM

Congrats on win.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/5/2013 8:03:00 PM

Thanks Richard ....Seren

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/31/2013 5:16:00 AM

Your words are so true. Those are scars that are not easy to heal. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/31/2013 8:20:00 AM

Thank you Lucilla.....Seren

Wayland Bunch

Date: 1/30/2013 12:52:00 AM

Ok the education continues. I saw the similarity between this and the haiku and had to look up the form. I like this poem alot, it's sad and powerful, probably my favorite type of poem as far as effect. I have a question if I may ask, is the form like the haiku, I mean I understand the syllables, but are the three lines like the haiku? I will do more research, but someone with personal experience is better? I am considering wandering away from my sonnets and couplets, trying some new things.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 6:53:00 AM

the syllable count is 10/7/6 I just look up the form and try to obey...Seren