Scars Are the Path To the Soul

The deepest cuts and mortal wounds
come from the ones we love the most
for we've pulled open ribs like doors
and let in darkness dressed as light
to ravage our innermost self.

No surgeon could triage the mangled
mess that our soul has become
so we curl up in a dark corner 
inside ourselves, resigned to die.

...But death eludes us.

So we lurch through life
like some Shyamalan ghost
who doesn't know that it's dead
stumbling through the darkness within.

Until that blessed day that we find...

Hopefully.


     Cautiously.


          Light.

A light that loves us.
Accepts our hurts.
Walks with us
back through the darkness.
Gently retracing
the lines of our scars.

Those scars that are the path to the soul.

9/23/18
Contest: Verses of Metaphors II

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/8/2018 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Jesse on your fine win.
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Date: 10/7/2018 10:33:00 PM
Wow, Jesse. Congrats on your most deserving top win. Beautiful.
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Date: 9/25/2018 7:55:00 AM
Nice write my friend...deep scars and Cuban cigars...might be a sequel to Scarface lol...^WW^
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Date: 9/25/2018 4:08:00 AM
Hello Jesse, I had to take a read of your latest poem here. I've written quite a few metaphysical poems. With this in mind, I really like your free verse on "Scars are the Path to the Soul." I really like your take on "Those scars that are the path to the Soul." (Brilliantly rendered for the final verse.) And the reference "... like some Shyamalan ghost," with regard to our lurching through life leaves much to ponder with the darkness aspect. Superbly Done!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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