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Scars Are the Path To the Soul

I’ve Been Betrayed Taken for granted Hurt and humiliated Abused by people I trusted Had my dreams and ambitions shattered Sometimes I wonder how I managed to survive Though some wounds were superficial Some were as deep as could be Each left a bruise A mark A blemish A damaged heart A mistreated psyche Scars are the path to the soul Not saying I’ll never let anyone enter AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on September 16, 2018 for contest VERSES OF METAPHORS II sponsored by LAURA LOO - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 10/8/2018 3:24:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win. So true, so beautiful.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/16/2018 11:45:00 PM
Powerful last two lines--preceded by a powerful build-up. Good luck in the contest, Line! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/16/2018 8:58:00 PM
wow, i like how you built this write up, great write Line, good luck in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lewis, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

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