Scarred Respite

(The Poem is about young love which ends after a one night stand. The villain Rain seduces and makes love to the Protagonist, Young Earth, and leaves her with a cold stare without even a word of Love)
It rained that night, the summer respite. "Dry days are over," my heart mused, forever blind. Dew drop kisses, caressed the tresses, wet wave seeped, hardening almond bunches. During the darkest hour, was the non-stop shower. Winds with power, left the deepest scar. Bright Sabbath followed in vain, couldn't conceal my pain, when I saw through the rainbow, the smirk of the grey cold sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Young Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 4:19 AM
very nice, i especially like the imagery in lines 4-8! good work and congrats.
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poet being featured this week Anula. Love, Carol
Kaler Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 11:05 AM
very vivid poem, the imagery is incredible, the poem is ver good, keep on writing
Poet Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 5:18 PM
Another good poem...liked it.
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July 9, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Thank you :)
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