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Scarlet Thorn

Forgive me, but I cannot stand the smell of haggard roses, red from man's abuse; though pleasing to the eye, the scent does tell of love that was once fair, but now cut loose. I wish to wallow in a grand bouquet comprised of roses painted like the moon, for virgin hearts are pure until they stray from gardens seeded with their fathers' boon. Tis true; an infant rose is white at birth, but there are those who live to taint the bud with careless hands, diminishing its worth because her needles drink dishonest blood. Fear not; I'd never yield a scarlet thorn, for I adore the color you were born!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/12/2009 8:25:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet, Michael! Any woman would be so glad to be in these gentle hands! Thank you!
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Date: 7/11/2009 8:25:00 PM
Nice sonnet, good use of metophors. I like the way you compair the rose to a fallen woman. To lose her purity leaves her scorned like the scarlet letter. Nice work, interesting read. Judy Riley
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