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Scapegoat Mutiny

Scapegoat Mutiny The perspicuous statements by The Man, meant to flatter, Were maximally inurbane. In hindsight could only alienate The dozens of individuals who now gravitate to retaliate. The Scapegoat Mutiny must succeed! Woe to those who think it transitory, bountiful malignant repercussions shall befall them! Any actions to dissipate will fail! Those are the claims of the mutineers. The capricious results will be perceived as beneficial by some And detrimental by others. 15 September 2016

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Skat A

Date: 9/15/2016 11:13:00 PM

James F, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2016 7:45:00 PM

James, ,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 9/15/2016 2:24:00 PM

Now there is one to chew on! Interesting how you conveyed this... as though neutral. I liked how you did that, hovering just outside the edges of your own poem, letting the subjects squabble with themselves as you share what you see... cool approach! Welcome to Soup, James. The site is pretty easy to navigate but it still takes some time to learn the ins and outs. Looking forward to reading more ...