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My dearest love, why do you cry in the morning? Are the sharp rays of light hurting your eyes? Remember times when we were young, spry, full of life? Recollections of shadows of yourself, It pains me to watch every day. Are you weary of the morning light, once which brought you Great joy, and optimistic dreams of the future, Exalted excitement on a rainy weekend? Is that all dust in the wind now? Softness that once brought safety and comfort, All you ever yearned for back then, Suffocates you, you grow restless and Cry in the morning light, your tears Are dust suspended in harsh rays, like us. My dearest love, have we made a mistake?

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Date: 7/27/2018 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Interesting..
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Date: 7/27/2018 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your heartfelt win, Gabi . I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2018 9:32:00 AM
Oh wow! Cutting poetry. Excellent. Congrats on your top placement Gabi :) xomo
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:54:00 AM
Congrats on first place.
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Date: 7/6/2018 12:21:00 AM
Gabi.. very nicely done!!
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