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Saying Goodbye

Each day at twilight, it seems to be so quiet Maybe the sun wants to leave some silence behind A peaceful time to cherish at the end of the day The air is also still as if the descending sun slows time To clear the mind, no rushing , no chaos Often no wind at all to stir things around the land At twilight take a look, you may find more than changes in the sky Or the color at the horizon reflecting in the clouds You may just find this quiet stillness, not much moving Just the sun saying goodbye, leaving for today With an impression making silence seem loud Heidi Sands 10/22/22

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/25/2022 6:29:00 PM

Oh my Heidi. You describe that transition as in a dream state just before waking - just lovely! :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/26/2022 6:22:00 AM

Thank you very much Linda. I hope you enjoy today :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/24/2022 10:20:00 AM

Wow! Heidi, You described the scene so well. Your well-written write has such a calm and serene tone to it. Well done. Have a nice day-Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2022 10:36:00 AM

Thank you very much Alexis. I like your positive comment. I hope you have a nice day too :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/23/2022 11:29:00 AM

Well caught, Heidi! This describe a moment many people treasured before radio & TV took over their lives! Aloha!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2022 1:04:00 PM

Thank you Rico. You are right and I do treasure it. Enjoy ! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/23/2022 9:06:00 AM

Heidi, you have done a wonderful job of capturing the sense of calm and beauty that pervades this moment of the day in your poem. The landscape was beautiful throughout this farewell.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2022 9:55:00 AM

Thank you Sotto. I appreciate your comments and kind feedback. I hope you enjoy today :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/23/2022 6:24:00 AM

Heidi, you always excel in bring the beauty of nature to another level! So many ways there are to experience it and yours is in a mutual communication and is lovely to read! Happy Sunday!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2022 6:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Mike. I appreciate your kind words. Happy Sunday :)

Charles Messina

Date: 10/23/2022 6:13:00 AM

The best thing about the sun saying good-bye is that it will always say hello again. Lovely write, Heidi. Enjoyed this! Have a nice Sunday...Charlie

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2022 6:55:00 AM

That is true Charlie. It will say hello again and again. I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope you have a nice Sunday. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/23/2022 5:17:00 AM

It is a peaceful and beautiful time of the day, as you so splendidly convey in this poem, Heidi. Enjoyed the scenery in this goodbye.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2022 6:54:00 AM

I love this time of day. Thank you Vijay :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/22/2022 5:50:00 PM

Hello Heidi, Described so well, a moment in twilight. And heard just above a whisper. Nice reflective feel in this one. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2022 6:53:00 AM

Thank you Richard :)