Saying Goodbye

When I closed the door one last time
                                 Turning to say my last good byes
                              You lay slumped in silence as I cried;
                         Where once you sparkled with honor and pride

                           Now, sadly, I leave you behind, alone
                                  Destined for places unknown
                     Gathering the pieces of my shattered heart
                 Each a reminder of the hope we would never part

                   All the adventures we would take, on highways
         And winding country roads over mountains that led to the sea
                Through rainstorms and blizzards and hot blistery days
                           In daylight and darkness we were free

                            Then, on that fateful Sunday morning,
                              As we drove along happily in song
                     Our relationship stricken and irreparably torn
                          By a reckless incident that now, I morn.



                     Written for my daughter, whose sadness I share.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 1:10 PM
"a reckless incident" that resounds with sadness.
Calasibetta Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Yes, unfortunate and sad. :)Paulette
Watt Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 3:12 PM
Paulette, you write of the sadness of saying goodbye with such grace. I hope these words have helped bring healing for your daughter, and a closeness for both of you as you share in the sadness. Hugs ~ John
Calasibetta Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 5:48 PM
Thank you for stopping by John~yes, writing this poem has helped both my daughter and myself to move on. Again, thank you. :)Paulette
Peck Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Oh, Paulette, I'm so sorry you and your daughter have this sadness. Your poem is sad and beautiful. I hope things will work out.
Calasibetta Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 4:58 PM
Thank you Ann~ As these things are a part of life we have to accept and find peace. Thank you for your thoughtfulness! :)Paulette
Daniel Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Poignant poem, Paulette:)
Calasibetta Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 4:59 PM
Thank you Jo~I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Rose  Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 3:40 PM
I really felt this one my dear friend, it tears at the heart strings, and I can only imagine your pain, you reigned this one in beauty and bittersweet memory, remember that a mother's greatest tool is prayer, I join you in this one my friend I pray one day she returns to you, Love xo
Calasibetta Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 4:59 PM
Thank you for your love and support. It was very healing to write this. XO Paulette
Sands Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 3:20 PM
Well expressed. I feel it in my heart Paulette. I hope you have a nice evening :)
Calasibetta Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:00 PM
Thank you for your kind and supportive comments. :)Paulette
George Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 7:02 PM
A heart rending story of leaving a loved one behind for reasons genuine or imagined ! Whatever it be, plucking a dear one from the heart can be so painful for both ! With prayer and forgiveness the splintered hearts can be repaired ! May God heal you and your daughter!
Calasibetta Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Thank you for your heartfelt thoughtfulness. :)Paulette
Goff Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 5:04 PM
I relate...soggy ache, takes time to dry & heal, never fully, but life is human error, good one Paulette...
Calasibetta Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 5:11 PM
Hi Jim, I wrote this for my daughter, who I share her sadness. Life throws us a few curves, ones we are not always ready for, but time does heal. :)Paulette
Cunningham Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Saying goodbye to a loved one is heartbreaking Paulette. I'm sorry for your loss. Tom
Calasibetta Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 5:09 PM
Thank you for stopping by to comment~ Actually I wrote this for my daughter who I share in her sadness.
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Paulette, What a beautiful sad story. To lose someone incident. My heart goes out to you. Prayers & Blessings ~ Debra
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