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Saying Goodbye

When I closed the door one last time Turning to say my last good byes You lay slumped in silence as I cried; Where once you sparkled with honor and pride Now, sadly, I leave you behind, alone Destined for places unknown Gathering the pieces of my shattered heart Each a reminder of the hope we would never part All the adventures we would take, on highways And winding country roads over mountains that led to the sea Through rainstorms and blizzards and hot blistery days In daylight and darkness we were free Then, on that fateful Sunday morning, As we drove along happily in song Our relationship stricken and irreparably torn By a reckless incident that now, I morn. Written for my daughter, whose sadness I share.

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Date: 4/8/2022 1:10:00 PM
"a reckless incident" that resounds with sadness.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/9/2022 6:08:00 AM
Yes, unfortunate and sad. :)Paulette
Date: 4/5/2022 3:12:00 PM
Paulette, you write of the sadness of saying goodbye with such grace. I hope these words have helped bring healing for your daughter, and a closeness for both of you as you share in the sadness. Hugs ~ John
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/5/2022 5:48:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by John~yes, writing this poem has helped both my daughter and myself to move on. Again, thank you. :)Paulette
Date: 4/4/2022 4:54:00 PM
Oh, Paulette, I'm so sorry you and your daughter have this sadness. Your poem is sad and beautiful. I hope things will work out.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/4/2022 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Ann~ As these things are a part of life we have to accept and find peace. Thank you for your thoughtfulness! :)Paulette
Date: 4/4/2022 8:06:00 AM
Poignant poem, Paulette:)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/4/2022 4:59:00 PM
Thank you Jo~I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 4/3/2022 3:40:00 PM
I really felt this one my dear friend, it tears at the heart strings, and I can only imagine your pain, you reigned this one in beauty and bittersweet memory, remember that a mother's greatest tool is prayer, I join you in this one my friend I pray one day she returns to you, Love xo
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/4/2022 4:59:00 PM
Thank you for your love and support. It was very healing to write this. XO Paulette
Date: 4/3/2022 3:20:00 PM
Well expressed. I feel it in my heart Paulette. I hope you have a nice evening :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/4/2022 5:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind and supportive comments. :)Paulette
Date: 4/2/2022 7:02:00 PM
A heart rending story of leaving a loved one behind for reasons genuine or imagined ! Whatever it be, plucking a dear one from the heart can be so painful for both ! With prayer and forgiveness the splintered hearts can be repaired ! May God heal you and your daughter!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/3/2022 8:31:00 AM
Thank you for your heartfelt thoughtfulness. :)Paulette
Date: 4/2/2022 5:04:00 PM
I relate...soggy ache, takes time to dry & heal, never fully, but life is human error, good one Paulette...
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/2/2022 5:11:00 PM
Hi Jim, I wrote this for my daughter, who I share her sadness. Life throws us a few curves, ones we are not always ready for, but time does heal. :)Paulette
Date: 4/2/2022 12:00:00 PM
Saying goodbye to a loved one is heartbreaking Paulette. I'm sorry for your loss. Tom
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/2/2022 5:09:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by to comment~ Actually I wrote this for my daughter who I share in her sadness.
Date: 4/2/2022 10:50:00 AM
Paulette, What a beautiful sad story. To lose someone incident. My heart goes out to you. Prayers & Blessings ~ Debra
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