Saxophone

...inspired by 'Black Tambourine' by Hart Crane


The cellar is his bleak repose,
in concert with the cockroaches and flies;
there he wipes his runny nose,
toils the day long, sunshine tries,

insinuates through rough and crumbled boards.
Lessons can't assuage his conflicts,
the bottom of the pile, his heritage affords
no more, the atmosphere restricts 

his breath. It leans against the wall,
his tarnished, dusty saxophone,
a measure of the time when he stood tall,
cadenzas blown with free and strident tone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:23 PM
A down and outer no doubt living with his memories andtrying to recapture his glory days. A sad one but fabulous descriptions.
Goudreau Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:28 PM
You've painted an awesome picture with this piece and also left the reader contemplating...an inspiring read. You are so talented. May God Bless!
Goudreau Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:27 PM
You've painted an awesome picture with this piece and also left the reader contemplating...an inspiring read. You are so talented. May God Bless!
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:32 PM
you are such a "mature" writer! WIsh I could be like that more often. This kind of made me think of that guy who lived in a basement with rats!! I guess that bleak atmosphere just reminds me of that movie!!
Babcock Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 8:18 PM
The sound of the sax. My son took music lessons for a while on hte sax. Yes, I remember you and thanks for your comment. love phyl
Eastman Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 6:32 PM
You write very interesting pieces.
Eastman Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 6:31 PM
You write very interesting pieces.
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