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Saxophone

...inspired by 'Black Tambourine' by Hart Crane The cellar is his bleak repose, in concert with the cockroaches and flies; there he wipes his runny nose, toils the day long, sunshine tries, insinuates through rough and crumbled boards. Lessons can't assuage his conflicts, the bottom of the pile, his heritage affords no more, the atmosphere restricts his breath. It leans against the wall, his tarnished, dusty saxophone, a measure of the time when he stood tall, cadenzas blown with free and strident tone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/19/2012 7:23:00 PM
A down and outer no doubt living with his memories andtrying to recapture his glory days. A sad one but fabulous descriptions.
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:28:00 PM
You've painted an awesome picture with this piece and also left the reader contemplating...an inspiring read. You are so talented. May God Bless!
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:27:00 PM
You've painted an awesome picture with this piece and also left the reader contemplating...an inspiring read. You are so talented. May God Bless!
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:32:00 PM
you are such a "mature" writer! WIsh I could be like that more often. This kind of made me think of that guy who lived in a basement with rats!! I guess that bleak atmosphere just reminds me of that movie!!
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:18:00 PM
The sound of the sax. My son took music lessons for a while on hte sax. Yes, I remember you and thanks for your comment. love phyl
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:32:00 PM
You write very interesting pieces.
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:31:00 PM
You write very interesting pieces.
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