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Savoring

Plush puffs of sincerity rest flush to the king of hearts bleeding feeding on oxygen blown free eternal fires of destiny where cinnamon wafts of excitement pour out percolated with precision slowly whistling for another spot swirling rhythmically in an never ending caramel cup Savoring every last drop

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 5:00:00 PM
Savoring every last drop of memories. Again, great write!
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Date: 8/18/2017 10:30:00 PM
Hi Tim, a beautifully delicious write. Enjoyed :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:08:00 AM
Savoring the last drop alright! :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 7:47:00 AM
- Delicious ... I enjoy it, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 10:56:00 PM
A savoring verse my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/16/2017 9:49:00 PM
YUM! Wonderful write Tim :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:38:00 PM
great words, eternal fires of destiny, may they never burn out....Seren
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:23:00 PM
Hi Tim , wonderful flowing write , cinnamon ,,mmmmm my mother bakes the best apple pie she always adds a little sprinkle of cinnamon to my one ::)))
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Date: 8/16/2017 1:32:00 PM
This is perfect!
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Date: 8/16/2017 8:35:00 AM
Wow I like the cinnamon wafts of excitement! Savor every last drop, yes! :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 6:09:00 AM
Lots of great phrases in your poetry, Tim. "Eternal fires of destiny" being excellent.
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Date: 8/16/2017 5:53:00 AM
Savoring every last drop with you, Tim. Good one to wake up to.
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