Savoring

Plush puffs of sincerity rest   
flush  to the king of hearts   
bleeding   feeding   
on oxygen  blown free   
eternal fires of destiny   
  
where cinnamon wafts of excitement   
pour out  percolated with precision   
slowly whistling for another spot   
swirling rhythmically in an never   
ending caramel cup     
    
Savoring every last drop
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Vaso Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Savoring every last drop of memories. Again, great write!
Ashley Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:30 PM
Hi Tim, a beautifully delicious write. Enjoyed :)
Downing  Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Savoring the last drop alright! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 7:47 AM
- Delicious ... I enjoy it, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 10:56 PM
A savoring verse my friend...god bless...^WW^
Ella Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 9:49 PM
YUM! Wonderful write Tim :)
Roberts Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 6:38 PM
great words, eternal fires of destiny, may they never burn out....Seren
Hopper Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 1:32 PM
This is perfect!
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Wow I like the cinnamon wafts of excitement! Savor every last drop, yes! :)
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 6:09 AM
Lots of great phrases in your poetry, Tim. "Eternal fires of destiny" being excellent.
Pandit Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 5:53 AM
Savoring every last drop with you, Tim. Good one to wake up to.
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