Savior, Father

Risen forefathers comforted you on the mountain, and talked to you about your soon to be 
death. A great transformation came apon        you and your clothes shined like a great light. 
Confusion overcame                                                      your disciples and fear at this 
transformation                                                                    What does it all mean? We 
should build                                                                                 our lord a temple 
here in his                                                                                     honor and one to 
our fore                                                                                         fathers, here on 
this moun-                                                                                     tain. The skies 
became                                                                                         grey with no 
visibility                                                                                         The disciples were
afraid of                                                                                         God's power!!!
They saw                                                                                       and heard a voice 
in power                                                                                         Jesus instructed 
the disciples                                                                                    in what to do. 
Jesus had to                                                                                      face the cross
alone, he was                                                                              our only savior. 
Praise God there is  an empty tomb, he rose to be the ultimate sacrifice for our sins, and 
Moses and Elias are talking with Jesus in heaven today. Discussing his master plan for our 
lives!! The empty tomb was a reality, eternal life a blessing and gift of God for you and me!!
Inspired by Luke 9:28-36 KJV of the holy scriptures~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/27/2011 7:11:00 AM
Do not let anyone tell you to get a life. You have one and God is using it. Stay close to Him.
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Date: 3/18/2010 9:31:00 PM
Amazing write, Doris.It is very creative as well.Continue to write great poems like this and spread the Word of God. -Jasmine 'Jaz'
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Date: 3/10/2010 3:32:00 PM
Wow I love this...And the tomb is empty...Praise be to GOD!!! ENJOYED!!! Marty
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:37:00 PM
Thanks for the reminder! Looking forward to the fulfillment of God's promises. Susan
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:36:00 PM
How wonderfully creative, it is amazing, and I love the words.. and thanks for the comment on my poetry... Constance
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Date: 3/8/2010 2:55:00 PM
HOw interesting. The opening which shows on my laptop screen seems to be an invitation. Did you mean it to be such? BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 3/8/2010 1:32:00 PM
thanks Doris for comments clothed in white very nice
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:37:00 AM
Glad that you was listening to the sermon yesterday...Great write but what is the hole???Not sure what it could be??. There was another earthquake in Turkey this time..Mom
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Date: 3/8/2010 8:34:00 AM
Doris, Thank you for your welcome comments on my blog today. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/8/2010 8:04:00 AM
Original,creative and the message so deep..amen..Charma
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Date: 3/8/2010 7:21:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Doris.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:16:00 AM
Thankxxx Doris for enjoying all my poetry today .. I just heard from my son last night so I posted a new blog ... its a happy Monday..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/8/2010 5:40:00 AM
Excellent Doris.. u really did a wonderful artistic job on the poem and your words are magnificent... so special.. luv the content and message.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:11:00 AM
Very original inspiratio Doris.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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