Savior Empties All

blood pumps through body Savior empties All of His curse of Cain sprinkled oxygenated my soul’s breath I’m reborn in heaven’s womb
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Hind Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 5:28 PM
stunning, Kim <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:43 PM
wow, short but impactful words. Faving.
DiMino Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:39 AM
Indeed, spirit abides in blood. As one's own drops fall, may they be while attempting to follow the steps of Christ.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 1:43 AM
It was not enough that Adam and Eve spoiled everything; they had to see Cain as the first killer.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 3:26 AM
The worst heartbreak, outside of Eden.
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 3:57 PM
A stunning little poem . Looks like a unique style of senryu
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 7:36 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 7:34 PM
I meant to say tanka. Changed to free verse instead.
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